A Raw Preview · 5:45am Apr 22nd, 2014
I've been working on the next chapter for a while now and as you probably know this is supposed to bring in the big one. And when I say big i mean BIG!!!
He sauntered towards it and hopped onto its bloody side, with a few well placed kicks he opened its gut and began to gorge himself, gulping down as much flesh as fast as he could. The other Slashers piled in and started swallowing anything they could get in their mouths, there was a sense of urgency to there feeding. It was very unlikely this area had no resident predators, the pack wanted to ovoid any kind of confrontation with a larger hunter or, a pack with greater numbers.
thump...
The pack continued to tear into the their kill with reckless abandon, only occasionally pausing to squabble over a choicer piece of meat.
Thump...
One of the Slashers paused in its sloppy eating and stood tall, looking around the clearing. It saw only the two Potbellies, still gawking at the edge of the trees. It quickly shoved its face back into the bloody mess.
THUMP!
The albino and several of his pack jolted upright, hearing the sound of an impact, their heads turning in every direction, keen to danger. After a few seconds of silence, they leaned back into their meal.
THUMP!!
Every head shot up and looked towards the mountain and the source of the sound.
THUMP!!! Crack... Snap.. CRRRREEEAAK!!!
There was the sound of wood breaking and in the darkness the Albino saw a tree topple over, other trees were moving now too!
THUMP!!! Crack! Crack! Snap!
One of the trees lifted off the ground and slammed back down, making the world seem to shudder. Fear flashed through the Albino as he understood what he was seeing were not moving trees, but a pair of legs. The other Slashers were begining to back away.
THUMP!!!
Again it stepped towards them, making the world jump violently and they took several steps back. The Albino saw the two Potbellies had turned tail and run, he also noticed the air was becoming heavy, it was getting hard to breathe.
THUMP!!! Crack! CREEEAAK!!!
With another step the air just seemed to get thicker, it pressed down on him making him struggle just to stand. Another tree had fallen in the wake of this thing, and it was so close now, covering a vast distance in just a few thunderous steps. The huge limb started up but before it could come down again, the Albino's nerve finally abandoned him and he ran as fast as his wobbly legs would carry him. The other members of his pack were only a few steps behind him. He turned to look back and saw a pair of huge squarish jaws, as white as sun bleached bone, clamp around their kill and lift it out of view. He turned and just kept running.
As the title of this blog implies this is raw. No proof reading, no editing, just me getting the events down. Let me know what ya think.
Once again, works well with the Attack on Titan soundtrack. Good buildup, seriously.