ALMOST DONE updates & a preview · 3:29am Mar 15th, 2014
I'm predicting chapter two will be finished tomorrow and posted, and then i will do a rewrite of chapter one. Let's be honest, chapter one was really awful. But worry not, my dear friends! I'm extremely pleased with how chapter two is currently reading! I have two scenes left to write, but i wrote quite a lot more tonight. This chapter will definitely far surpass 1,000 words. I'm anxious to finish it and post it so I can get your opinions.
Again. I'm pretty unhappy with chapter one. It's mediocre to poor quality, and it could be so much better, so when i rewrite it, there will be note. I definitely recommend rereading it after the rewrite because its going to have more details, and some more things may happen to Pinkie. I'll also be elaborating more on the mind control as i felt that was neglected.
I feel like it will read like two completely different people wrote the chapters until I rewrite chapter one....
So a preview of chapter two:
"I can't help but wonder, Rarity, does the drape match the curtains?"
-diamond dogs will be poofed from their homes
- teacups will shatter, and turn into worms
-How will Rarity react in such an unladylike scenario?
-What's wrong with Pinkie Pie?
Find out in Chapter Two!
