A tweak here and there.

A little more editing going on again, this time on Chapter 4: Bullets Never Bluff.

Mostly it's small things like punctuation or rewording a sentence or two, but there are some details that, while minor, change the scene a little. For example, Daisy has gone from being 5 to being 10 years old. This was mostly because I guesstimated the cmc's ages on the first pass, and then thought about it some more after publishing.

Thanks for sticking with me guys and gals, Chap. 5 is still rolling along.

-Sparkus