May
16th
2012
Plot! · 2:11am May 16th, 2012
ok people, due to the large amount of dislikes for 'Surprise' ( seriously compared to human nature suprise is a complete flop). there will an actual story line.
basically Surprie's time traqvelling will have consequences, and she will have to go on a journey to fix everything. A bit cliche, but it's what I do best.
udeas and comments are appreciated.
On another note, it will be a while before I update either of my fics, due to uni work.......so I'll and do another few chapters later this week.
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basically Surprie's time traqvelling will have consequences, and she will have to go on a journey to fix everything
That's what I was thinking too ,interacting with people in the past WILL have consequences ,especially that one with Trixie. Nightmare Moon is no problem ,but Applejack could talk about that little foal with the prin- oh wait ,they are their aunties
udeas and comments are appreciated.
Ideas for the 'journey' ?
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(the typos in that blog post are intentional..at least I think they were...)
anyway I have most of the plot figured out, but I plan this to be sort of sequel to 'human nature' with the characters hinting at events that I have yet to add to the fic at this time.
some suggestions on who the readers would like to see in the story would be nice, Trixie will make a return..and I'll try to have Zecora in there somewhere.
currently working on a villian, need help on design and persona....
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Well I only have the suggestion for the main 6.
I don't really like any of the others ponys (Royalty excluded) ...
currently working on a villian, need help on design and persona....
well : You could make a draconequus ,not necessarly Discord but another one .... perhaps like a brother of Discord who seeks revenge and sees his opportunity with Surprise?
Personallity well ... He could be as wicked as Discord but he doesn't make Chaos ,he could be one who makes Illogic things for example?
If that's the way ,then he would be a prankster. But one who would make pranks to actually hurt others. And yes : Chaos =/= Illogic ,sure it has some things in common ,but they aren't the same.
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nice idea, but I did think of something, since MLP is kinda like a fairy tale like world, I decided to use that idea for the main villian and supporting cast.
I plan to give a proper backstory to the history of Equestria, the princesses and Discord.
another Draconequues sounds good.....I think I'll use that.
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