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    Everfree Northwest!

    I'm here!!!!!!

    Who's all here? Hit me up!

    Discord is Twi-Fi#5147
    Twitter @Twi_Fi_0101

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Feb
24th
2014

Last chapter · 9:08pm Feb 24th, 2014

The last chapter has been written, again... this chapter has been a particular pain to write. I knew how I wanted it to end but I just couldn't seem to get it right. So, I have finally gotten it where I like it. Now, to edit it. I should have it up very soon... work has been crazier and crazier as we get closer to March, the month where everyone does everything. Nice weather or not I seriously hate this time of year.

A few things: This was my first fan fiction, ever. I haven't done creative writing of any kind in years, I usually write boring technical stuff, and this story has been far more successful than I had ever imagined. Thank you to everyone who left comments and enjoyed what I have written so far and thanks to everyone that has given me some pointers and things to work on, I'm much obliged.

Okay, I'll stop blogging and finish the bloody story!
Cheers!

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Comments ( 1 )

I just read this from start to finish and I am quite pleased on how it turned out. I fixed about 50 typos though... I hate jadfsadkjfhoasifgodhfbu freaking typos. If anyone sees anymore please tell me. lol I didn't notice any issues with pacing except that the story it's self was pretty fast paced but I kept with the tempo so it seems to work out. Although it's hard for me to be my own critic because I see everything I did wrong or should have changed but whatever... aside from fixing typos and little errors, I'm leaving it as is.
I can't believe it turned out to be 13k words, I was thinking like 5k before I started... lol

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