Question

Ok, I'm almost afraid to ask this question but....is Grevin a Gary Stu in Inner Chaos? ...Ok I wasn't so much afraid of asking that question as I am the possible answers. Let me know.

-Grev

Comments

[The Prancing Faggot]

Not to hurt on you but he kinda is, but all you need to do is show more weaknesses in him.

[Seraph973]

No more them Goku is. I think he is fine.

[ChaosSapphire]

He's more of a

Grevin-stu

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[TPDonut]

Use this to check
http://www.springhole.net/writing/marysue.htm

[Serendipitous]

I think he's a very interesting character, I like him. This is one of my favorite stories!

[Mortal Kombat]

1863990 That's not funny.......why am I laughing?

[Nihatclodra]

A bit, but at the same time: his character kind of needs to be with how the story is set up...

[ChaosSapphire]

1864584

Because deep, deep down., you have a fetish for bad jokes..

[ChaosDeathscytheEnd]

People are often misinformed or don't understand what a Gary Stu or a Mary Sue is. This guy describes it pretty well. It's a youtube link.

/watch?v=qnokGcoUOmE

So, essentially, no, your Character is not a Gary Stu.

[Fucks Ungiven]

No, he is a bit OP but he is an interesting character. I personally wish he would've held of on the sex. Just to be a dick. To you viewers and the other characters

[Xxizzy12xX]

Well he is unique i'll say that but he is no Gary sue because he is a character who's past just keeps on catching up with him while he wants to reform and adjust to new land he's been brought to.
P.S. Grevin is kind of a dark person still and lashes out at people who've hurt him in the past but I don't blame him its for a good reason. maybe? I dont know.
Well thats just my opinion

[Xxizzy12xX]

1863990 Ha that was cleaver well played
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