Thanks for your coments

Sorry that The Warriors of the Triad is not written better, I thought of this before Season 3 of my little pony.
I well try harder to make it better it is first story. You all so have to think of it like a my little pony ep, they really don't go throw hard ships as much as you think.
Also the Ponies make friends easy the first ep of the season's makes that clear and sens its like the guy dream to be there they are willing to be there friends. Also The guys are of form there to begin with so Things are coming to them like they all was cud do it. They are Ponies that be came baronies, and whet back to there ponies self's. This in the story well be reveled soon I was to make bans with the girls as quick as I can so I can get to the good stuff trust me, what have in my head was going to be a short story to begin with but know I prolonging it. So the first few chapters are what I regale thought of for the short story then there is a big battle that I was going to make the end of it, but then I thought of a longer story and a better ending. So sorry it seemed if like things are happening quickie after the first battle things get a lot harder for the guys.