Feb
12th
2014
Updating chapters · 5:51am Feb 12th, 2014
Hey Everyone,
Last week I submitted Broken Dreams to The Royal Guard for evaluation. I thought I had a fighting chance and as it turned out it did ok. I made it to tier one... so not as far as I thought.
They recommended a few different groups to get help and one of them that I looked into was the Overly Extensive Editors group. I’ve been going over the chapters with SubShock over the last few days and there have been some noticeable improvements in how the story flows.
These updates will be posted this evening, you will know if a chapters been updated because it will now have a roman numerals in front of it. Feel free to let me know what you guys think.
Added:
And the updates are now done.
