Almost 7000 Words for Chapter 12 · 6:22pm Feb 8th, 2014
I really pushed myself to get this done before Feb 23, and boy do I think it paid off. My only concern, does everything I wrote fit together. Did I cover to much story for one chapter. Is everyone in character. How about the dialogue? Is there too much show not tell. I'm not a very organised person, and as you all know my leaning difficulties do hurt some of my righting.
Anyways, once the spelling and grammar is fixed, I would like to pick a hand full of you to prepared the chapter in G-docs to help me get an early opinion on it's strengths and weaknesses. Editing will be turned off, but feel free to leave comments in the document should I pick you. Also, PM your final thoughts on the chapter when you finish reading. I'll only pick two or three out of anyone who comments and they are going to be random depending on how many people respond (though I'll try and pick long time followers if I can remember you, the site only allows me to keep tabs of the last 100 people who favorites, witch is a shame since I can't tell whose been tracking the story since the beginning)
Also, miner spoiler for you long time followers of MMBB a character that was deleted during the rewrite will be making a small cameo, one that does server some plot importance.
