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SUPERCHARGER2001


I love music, I love playing music, and I love certain aspects of life.

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Jan
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5 Months! Temporary Departure: Consider Reading · 9:03am Jan 28th, 2014

I'm taking a long-overdue break.

I'm taking a very long break away from this site and my computer (I hope).

What story deserves a final chapter before I go.

This isn't going to be some silly "Oh I quit! I'm sick of this fandom!" type leaving. I really, really, really, really have a new avenue to go on and this site and my computer can't break me into those higher authorities. I got time so I will take this hard and slow.

So, I moved into my new room three days ago, and before that while I was working, I asked my friend Graham if he was willing to make some music and he said sure, so before he camped at my house (I don't know what terms you guys call someone staying at your house, but out here, it's considered camping. So let me finish and accept that I don't say sleepover or stay at my house.) I heard his music, and at first I was disappointed, but then I started drilling my head into the positive atmosphere that the tone of his album release had settled for someone like me. And after that I enjoyed it more fluently, look, all I will say is that if you don't like slow noise/drone music, than you won't like what we play. He needed vocals, so I offered because I wanted to contribute, so now I will be laying down vocals on his tracks sometime whenever, and I will be hammering down the drum parts and I have to say that when I mean drums, I don't mean some crunchy thick tune, drone music isn't meant for the pummeling sounds of hard rock and the punishing sounds of Thrash Metal, but drone is meant for the open-minded. Don't assume some 4 chord progression with a steady beat, you want to hear drone?! I recommend someone like Swans, Sun O))) or Godflesh.

So, my friend released a new album now, and its out, so I'm planning to buy it, or just download it for free, I haven't decided. On his third release he is planning is when I'm supposed to finally show my chops in vocals and drums. I would like to do a harsh Baritone voice like Michael Gira because that would blend so awesomely with the music were creating.


So, as for me quitting temporary, I just have to say that I already decided this months earlier, but I didn't because I too afraid of being away from my computer, but now that I have other plans and the will power is far more superior now. I'm quitting Fimfiction and my computer (hopefully) for a few weeks, at least. I would like to make it 10 weeks if possible. The only source of me being on computer is, and if I ever have a story idea, and I need to make final errands on people that owe me edits, i.e. Rotorix, Mr Grimdark, SongCoyote, and Dark Avenger. Just you four really, and no, I'm not trying to sound harsh at all, I'm just making a valid statement that before I go I would gladly recommend those edits so I can have material to release when I do get back, because I doubt that you will be focused on it as soon as I leave. SongCoyote I'm willing to let go because that person has done so much, and I cant thank them enough. Rotorix, I'm not mad at you, if you are wondering, I just want to know the fuss of those edits. I will post those documents on your gmail soon, but couldn't you have just download them from the HTML bar on the left hand side, right at the bottom of the story. Mr Grimdark now, I know we had minor disagreements over my and your reasons for editing my work, and all, but I do read them back, and I love them, but I'm still new, so sorry if I didn't notice that they weren't entirely correct. I just really want you to finish the last two chapters is all. And I would gladly appreciate that you would consider reading the Equestria: Z story one day. Dark Avenger, well, I will see you in gmail occasionally to catch up on whats been happening dude, alright.

My last errands on this site are minor and require no ones attentive but my own.


The state of the stories....

MBLS - that story is by far my most successful piece, and it has an ending that will fucking shock all of you, I'm serious, this ending is something I have never heard of, or at least done in the way I'm currently conceiving it in my head. The story in general, however, is going to be on hiatus as with my other pieces of mid-average literature.

True Addiction - I said that this deserved a prequel, and or a sequel even, but....considering my new interest in getting away, this new brand of tie-ins will have to wait. I also said to my BIPFF Grimdark that I would create a new story to tie in after making a chapter or two MBLS but with recent events, its now shelved.

Equestria: Z: The story of Twilight Sparkle and the Pandemic: Pt. I - this is my piece, this is my life, this. Right. Here. Right. Now, is my own idea that nobody, shall and will ever take away from me. Guess what, I created something that no one ever dared on this site, ever. NO ONE HAD DARED THE IMPOSSIBLE LIKE I HAVE! Grimdark, you are the only guy that knows the events of this story and how it will play out, so I trust that you don't tell a living soul on the internet and people around you because this is something so unique, that its far too zany for even the craziest of authors to try and replicate on this site. I had so many plans! So many plans! So much time to think, and not succeed in creating. So much bloody time! I had so many ideas that I cant tear away from my head because I have new things to do. Like Andrew Ryan once stated right before Rapture truly went to hell: You can KILL me! BUT YOU WILL NEVER HAVE MY CITY!

Thats basically my same thinking for this story, you can destroy me and ridicule me, you can set me back and berate me, you can vilify and belittle me, but you will never steal my story because I am the first to attempt such a beast, no one will actually know what I'm talking about besides Grimdark.

Helpless Child - This story tanked, it just tanked, but there was a few bright spots from a couple people that make me so happy. This story canned because I didn't give it time to simmer, I didn't give it time to flourish, as I created it out of my friends album, and because I wanted to score a nice Feature box, but to no avail. I have a very good pal of mine who made sure I knew that it was a failed attempt. I'm sorry. I think I can totally relate to Motley Crue on their Theater Of Pain release, because it sucked so bad that they didn't give a shit so long as the certifications and money came in. That was my direct problem with this story, I just didn't think. Will I create a new chapter to it. Of course I will, but most likely only after I get back.

The Two Idiots Of Canterbury (Part of Equestria: Z) - this story is so dead, that it is ridiculous. I fucking am sad at my laziness because this story is so funny, and it was a piece that never got into the real gritty detective horror thriller stuff, because I just didn't have the urge to try. All the jokes are all off the cuff, minus the grammar and I read it myself a few times, and despite it being sub-par and nothing at all spectacular, it was a funny story. A more comedic side to what cop life is all about with the blend of Equestria: Z universe in there.


Now, to make this all the more silly, I have an ingrown toe nail infection that the problem arose because of me not treating my toe with the proper care and me cutting the nail to small that when it grew back, it weaved under my skin and stopped some of the blood flow, or at least, decreased its usual natural flow, which then in return. Made it inflamed and somewhat purple on the sides because that's where the problem is at. Now in 15 hours, I have to go and get them to remove it at the hospital, they have to stick three needles at pinpoint locations that will stop the calcium build up in my toe, which would then freeze for about 2 hours because if frozen any longer (I have to warm it up myself.) the toe will die, and it will have to get chopped. Once frozen, they will then lather it in some sticky yellow muddled mess of a liquid that makes the blood stick to the yellow stuff if it starts dripping from my foot, and then after that. They get the tools, sanitize them once more before starting, and once they do, I will be stuck there watching them tear my toe apart for about 20 minutes, because if I had to watch while it wasn't frozen, then I would be there screaming and crying because I would have to suffer the pain, this is why they freeze your toe, so you don't have to cry in agony. Then after that is done, they wrap my foot in this ridiculous amount of bandages and these almost composite plastic casts, I mean fuck, I didn't break my foot. They write up a prescription, giving me the piece of paper so I can take it to a medical pharmacy one block away, and after I wait, they hand me drugs to numb my pain afterward since the real pain you have to go through doesn't start until your toe is warmed up, then you feel the throbbing, you feel the echoing sounds of the tools pecking at you like a raven feasting out of some dirty rubbish bin. Since it is winter in Canada, we have the heaters cranked up in my dads van, so the process is way quicker than what it should be. I shouldn't have to sit there with the real pain starting only 10 minutes after my surgery, but I end up doing it anyways. This is why it is silly because I will be dormant for about a week, that means plenty of time on the computer, and no time to practice or play music or do homework, man school is going to be fucking tough as soon as I get back. Currently were still on exams, that is why second semester will suck.


I like to thank some people here: Rotorix, Mr Grimdark, Nightwolf289, SongCoyote, KiltedKey, Dark Avenger, Regidar, Nightingale95, and firefeng for being there and supportive of me guys, you all are the best. I know there is one or two I didn't mention, but I cant remember so just shout out if you do know that I forgot.


As I said before, I will create one final chapter to whatever story man, its all I really want to do. Just please, someone, pick a bloody story so I don't have to force it out of you, because forcing something is something I don't like to condone anymore.


And those, edits, please people, please guys, please tell me the state and try commencing more of yourself into those edits because its something I so badly want.


Now Dalton, I'm sure as fuck that no one here knows you, and I am 100% positive that I never mentioned anything about you that pertained to your true identity, so I'm absolutely sure that you are still good, besides Grimdark knowing, and remember dude. As usual, call me whenever you read this, albeit either the weekend or at night. If you want, and also, River Song is still a silly character and I never liked her as much as other semi companions. And people will only know the true you in HiE, and I'll make sure to stay the true you when I do create it.


So, uh, yeah. Comment and give me your opinion and otherwise, just, see you later.

When the chapter is done for whatever story you choose, I will only be on computer in the gmail area sometimes, to check story progression in peoples edits.

See you in 4-10 weeks.

5 months off Coca-Cola and pop by the way! 154 days in total.

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Comments ( 72 )

Before i read this heartbreaking Blog i wanted to say im writing a short comment reply on your "Whatever happened to freindship" story.

I posted a few mistakes with only one example to be nice then i will tell you my opinion of the story when im done reading. :twilightsmile:

Anyway im gonna read this blog now...... (my heart is pounding)

I feel your sorrow, brother! I'm so sorry man! But...It has to be done.

This song came on just as I read your comment, consider this my swan song. :applecry:

This is what I feel since I'm leaving for now man.

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Basically, it goes like this for what I'm trying to say out of these three pics.

Let me start over again...

This time I have to get it right...

For this is my final chance to prove myself to you...

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

You cant be my BPIFF if you leave and dont talk to me for 10 weeks :raritydespair:
Is there anyway i can keep in touch with you? I really wanted to be your friend :applecry::applecry: not just some random internet guy :trixieshiftright:

I know we talked about your dream before. I told you to chase your music dream and you are I AM VERY PROUD OF YOU just dont drop off he face of the planet :pinkiesad2: I still wanna talk to you in between the 10 weeks or so AND help you with your chapters :twilightoops:

ANYWAY enough faggot emo stuff coming from me:

Grimdark, you are the only guy that knows the events of this story and how it will play out, so I trust that you don't tell a living soul on the internet and people around you because this is something so unique,

I will NEVER betray your trust, you can believe in me, I WANT to see this done somday :pinkiehappy:

I also said to my BIPFF Grimdark that I would create a new story to tie in after making a chapter or two MBLS but with recent events, its now shelved.

DUDE :facehoof: I told you that sounded really really cool you would have to change the first chapter of MBLS to make this work and change up True Addiction which will be kind of tough
regardless
This is a good idea you should DO IT.

Helpless Child - This story tanked, it just tanked,

I dont wanna be a dick but it did, I read what you said after this and i understand why.
Write it if you really want its not THAT bad you just need some heavy editing to make it right and then a BEAST 3rd chapter

The only source of me being on computer is, and if I ever have a story idea, and I need to make final errands on people that owe me edits, i.e. Rotorix, Mr Grimdark, SongCoyote, and Dark Avenger. Just you four really, and no, I'm not trying to sound harsh at all, I'm just making a valid statement that before I go I would gladly recommend those edits so I can have material to release when I do get back, because I doubt that you will be focused on it as soon as I leave.

I already said i will help, just probably not the moment the sun comes up tommorw.
I will ESPECIALLLY HELP if it means you will come back and keep working hard on your writing and be passionate about it

MBLS

This story was really fucking GOOD. Sounded awkward and robotic when you weren't in an action scene but you struck gold on this.
This is the story i vote you do before you leave.


Once again,
I wanna be your actual friend so do something like Hogwarts Magic to make that happen okay?
Sorry for being a harsh editior but i REALLY mean it when i say "i want to see you keep writing and be come very good at it, hell even get known on this site" i really do.


Anyone reads this and thinks im a sappy faggot WELL FUCK YOU go back to masturbating male on male pony porn for all i care
This is some serious shit right here coming from me :duck:

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Oh my fuck, don't read that story! Okay, read it, but I must tell you that I didn't submit the story because I never edited it all yet. That is why its still in locked down besides me not adding ponies yet, but for the love of god, if you read it, understand that I never edited it yet.

1767884 LMFAOOOOOOOOO

Okay good i will delete that comment-in-progress because i did NOT know that.

I will just tell u if i like it when i read it okay?

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Keep it if you want, dude. I don't mind, unless you already deleted it. :rainbowderp:

1767897 No i revised my comment/opinion

Now PLEASE reply to the big paragraph below you okay?

Dasvedanya, Charger. I understand your reasons for leaving.
I need to do this sometime too... if only I couldd bear it.


As for edits, man I guess I will have to go and put them all in the comments, now won't I?

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No, my brother. We have gmail for that. And I'm still fucking stuck at on how to make a Google.doc.

Why not just take a long break like me, well I'm attempting to, but anyways...

Don't let the site drag you down to the point of emotional exhaustion.

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I'm touched. :pinkiesad2:

And no, unfortunately I didn't cry.

Whew, this is going to be a long comment, get ready.

You cant be my BPIFF if you leave and dont talk to me for 10 weeks

Don't worry, buddy. Eventually, all things must fade bro.

I know we talked about your dream before. I told you to chase your music dream and you are I AM VERY PROUD OF YOU just dont drop off he face of the planet :pinkiesad2: I still wanna talk to you in between the 10 weeks or so AND help you with your chapters :twilightoops:

I'm thrilled and shocked that you still hold that urge for me to succeed in that dream I always wanted to complete. The only way we can talk to each other is between me creating my final chapter and possibly gmail, if I decide to go on computer, no scratch that, I have to go on for at least a minute or two every couple weeks to check on those edits from everyone else. Doubt any of will be accomplished though.

Is there anyway i can keep in touch with you? I really wanted to be your friend :applecry::applecry: not just some random internet guy :trixieshiftright:

But you are just a random internet guy, you are my internet guy. :pinkiesmile: The pal that can can almost just reach the final part to meet the real thing, but can't due to us living in separate countries ironically. Despite the gmail gig, I really don't have another way, maybe Xbox live?

There is no problem with being a little extra emotional. But, never overuse the emo stuff to the point of sounding too off, you know what I mean, dude? Nah, fuck that, sound as emo as you like, I still think you are cool.

As for the True Addiction story, I was contemplating on either meshing the two together or just create a totally separate story, I don't know man. I just don't know. Would I actually work on it? I would like too, but it will have to wait unless I really, really, really, really have to write.

I'm happy you would want to see the Equestria Z story one day, I'm very proud the story has aged nicely since I stopped working on it.

Helpless Child - the premise is good, the concept is good, the execution was average while the grammar was still terrible. Man, I wished I had more to go on instead of just complete lack of good writing skill. Overall, I like the teenage style I got going here, so I will complete it soon as I get back.

I already said i will help, just probably not the moment the sun comes up tommorw.
I will ESPECIALLLY HELP if it means you will come back and keep working hard on your writing and be passionate about it

I'm always dedicated to writing, I decided this as an equal to my life, for my mother, for my teacher and my family. Writing is my fuel and my goal to improve on life.

But, but....:twilightangry2: Oh you!:flutterrage: Why must you make me choose, I mean, damn it! There are reasons why I don't want to be on the computer and this site as much anymore, because all through your life, you sit there and wonder what the day is going to be and how can you react to it, whether it being good or bad, you still have to choose, being addicted is like taking your personal emotions away and leaving everybody out but the urge to exceed the limits and just have that one extra hit. In my case, I defeated one enemy, and I still have three left: The computer, my unknown A.D.D and my insecurities. I defeated the addiction to pop, dude. The Eight Year War, I like to call it. Now, computer has to go, then whatever else I feel that needs to be gone. Not to add extra drama on purpose but since I'm in the moment. I am 100% sure that I have Paranoia Schizophrenia, or developing it.

As for making me stay with that lucrative offer...:trixieshiftright: Hmm....

I will make a decision as soon as I post a final chapter in MBLS or whatever it is I do.

MBLS is gold?!!!?!

Yeah, that's something I wish I get to hear from my stories more often, the most generous ones I earned are from you, and from this one guy on Helpless Child and Nightwolf289. Also True Addiction where this person opens up about their dad being an actual heroin addict at one point.

I know they are robotic and silly, and bland, and dissatisfaction, but I will improve, read the last comment about those pics I post. It totally relates to me dearly.

Don't worry about anyone thinking that you are some sappy faggot, if anything, do I do, just remember that they are poisoning themselves for keeping those negative thoughts in their hearts.

Once again,

I wanna be your actual friend so do something like Hogwarts Magic to make that happen okay?
Sorry for being a harsh editior but i REALLY mean it when i say "i want to see you keep writing and be come very good at it, hell even get known on this site" i really do.

I know you do, in fact, I'm floored that you care this much, and our friendship shall be gladly cherished within my heart whenever I think of you. :heart: Maybe Xbox Live, we can see each other.:pinkiehappy:

As for my writing, it's going to take months and years before I become any good as KiltedKey, right?

Does Kilted have any editors?:unsuresweetie:

I will decide whatever it is I guess after I produce some chapter. I don't know which, but I'll wait until later today to see what people vote so I can choose, but M/B/L/S is looking very promising.

You have been a good lad, and if I stay off, I shall try chatting with you in gmail when I'm at school or something.

Comment posted by Mr Grimdark deleted Jan 28th, 2014

1768004 LOL i did get pretty sappy there :pinkiegasp: oh well i was speaking for real idc if it looked kinda gay. :trixieshiftleft: in reality my heart is cold and my demeanor is rough.
Im still a manly man of manliness :coolphoto:

Gmail or xbox live is perfect im on both a lot and you can choose either one or both :pinkiehappy:
Umm if you want :fluttercry:

But one thing, You are only 16 if i remember correctly. Thats quite a young age to plan out your life already but its a mature way of thinking and im proud of you, you gotta finish school before ANY dream can become a reality.
I thought you wanted to pursue metal music? The drone music your friend started is still pretty cool though.
Do not stop writing a story or anything in general if you get too much negative feedback if you still really want to write or do said thing. Its a poison way of thinking and won't get you far especially of people criticize your music and make you wanna stop (got to keep pushing)

Anyway thanks for appreciating me caring and all that :twilightsmile:
Me and some others (hopefully) will work on edits or whatnot while you are gone.
Finally, your outside life is more important not some pony website.
I have told this to multiple authors here (becuase its true) you dont have to try hard to please the people on here, its just the internet, if they are bitching about you not writing its because they are not friends and dont give 2 shits about ya to being with :twilightangry2:
It would be really cool if you came back and did these stories someday. Hopefully yo give us MBLS before you go at least :pinkiesad2:

Good luck in life, hopefully we can stay in touch on gmail or xbox :rainbowkiss:
Maybe meet up someday :rainbowderp:

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in reality my heart is cold and my demeanor is rough.

Awe, you are too kind. :twilightsmile:

Metal music is my life, dude. It will always be my main frontal assault in showing the world what I'm about. Drone music is, however, a worthy first experience in actually being in a band, so of course I will try it. It isn't for everyone, and it shouldn't be.

I will be leaving soon, I hope. I would like to give you an inquiry about my grand scheme before I go, I just thought of it over the course of a few hours, in theory, it will work, but to execute it almost flawlessly, requires....some help.

One thing that has got me thinking about staying is when I was in a thread watching a video this person made that basically discussed the 7 main things you shouldn't do when making a fimfic. The number 1 was simply not being proud of what you created. The reason that touched me was because I tried so hard to please everyone but myself, so who cares if the grammar is terrible and bland and robotic, I don't care nearly as much yet actually. What I realized is that I'm supposed to make a story for me, and to release it is very brave on its own merits. Too have me feeling low from you and everyone else belittling me about my work, constructively mind you. Made it forget that I'm in this for myself, not for any of you, but for me. I'm number 1 in this situation. I know the grammar isn't best, but hey, I'm trying my hardest to decrease my overall mistakes, plus with the things I've learned since I first started is that always accept the pelting you get from everyone else. That was my little conscience for telling me too stay. So because I'm in it for myself, than you made me realize that I might be starting my future plans too young, but in return, I just disregarded that because it's another excuse for me to stay lazy on the computer.

All in all, you have been great, and very supportive, and I hope I could see you on either the Xbox or gmail someday, if not sooner. :heart:

So because I'm in it for myself, than you made me realize that I might be starting my future plans too young,

No thats just a little food for thought its not lazy, but yeah you shouldnt spend so much time on the computer like a failure such as myself :applecry:
Its really not an excuse. Thinking about life to lon could be a mistake but its very positive thinking just dont do too much

I was thinking....
What if you only got on at night time for a bit when your plans for the day have been completed? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:
That could work out fine. :scootangel:

The reason that touched me was because I tried so hard to please everyone but myself, so who cares if the grammar is terrible and bland and robotic, I don't care nearly as much yet actually. What I realized is that I'm supposed to make a story for me, and to release it is very brave on its own merits. Too have me feeling low from you and everyone else belittling me about my work, constructively mind you. Made it forget that I'm in this for myself, not for any of you, but for me. I'm number 1 in this situation.

Yes they main thing is to become a better writer so you yourself is important
BUUUUUUUUT
Why write if you didnt do it for an audience?
Isn't it pointless?
You need feedback, good or bad, to improve overall. You cant do it all urself
You may have said all that without thinking :ajsmug:

Good luck in life, hopefully we can stay in touch on gmail or xbox :rainbowkiss:
Maybe meet up someday :rainbowderp:

Good luck to you too Jeremy :pinkiehappy:
[Xbox or Gmail]
Yes both i hope very soon :pinkiesad2:

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I will be leaving soon, I hope. I would like to give you an inquiry about my grand scheme before I go, I just thought of it over the course of a few hours, in theory, it will work, but to execute it almost flawlessly, requires....some help.

Im all ears friend from far away :pinkiehappy:
I will see what help i can give with alotted time :pinkiesad2:

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Think about it?! With this temporary goodbye, I could create one last chapter for all of my stories, even possibly releasing another one to True Addiction, or in fact, expand on it with another one-shot before creating an actual novel piece once I get back. Imagine all of them, colliding together in the story updates on the main page of Fimfiction itself, that would be very hilarious. 6 stories by me all appearing at one time. What a fitting way to end my first era on this site.

So, what do you say? You think it's good.

Well, now for the second part of this scheme, one needs help...meaning me, and the other would love to assist...meaning you, so here's what I'm thinking of. I can make the chapters, and you can give them the pop. Or, at the very least, just check them over with me, and see if they are decent. Now, the hard part is that I don't want to spend so much time because I made a big scene here about leaving, so that is why if this plan is going to happen, I need to make it flourish with the most absolute.

Will you help?

1772524 Wait-- Do you mean making all the stories tie into each other or just making a last chapter for each?

Now, the hard part is that I don't want to spend so much time because I made a big scene here about leaving,

Red flag, whatever the answer is for the above, this will take a week or two.

I can make the chapters, and you can give them the pop. Or, at the very least, just check them over with me, and see if they are decent. Will you help?

Ofcourse friend :twilightsmile:
anyone else? :rainbowderp:

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Oh god no! How in the hell is a drug addled Twilight Sparkle (True Addiction) going to fit with a deranged mentally scarred Twilight Sparkle (Mind/Body/Light/Sound) with a town that almost burned to pieces, and followed by that with a depressed Apple Bloom (Helpless Child) wanting to watch her world fall into asunder, then top it off with Twilight Sparkle (Equestria: Z: The story of Twilight Sparkle and the Pandemic: Pt. I) being a main protagonist in the worldwide epidemic of Zombies. Finally ending it with two random cops (The Two Idiots of Canterbury (Part Of Equestria: Z)) stuck in a murky town that is already connected with Equestria: Z?! You think that can all tie together, smoothly?

I have to admit, I'm wondering why you never mention the last story. :trixieshiftright:

As for anyone else, no. I'm asking you because you're the only one that really does care. Corgii, and everyone else, they have other things and I don't want to intrude. You, however, you seem very interested, so that is why I would like you.

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How in the hell is a drug addled Twilight Sparkle (True Addiction) going to fit with a deranged mentally scarred Twilight Sparkle (Mind/Body/Light/Sound) with a town that almost burned to pieces,

that could work :twilightsheepish:
I doubt most of these people are busy, they just dont give a shit.
i know for a fact NightWolf is busy as all hell.
I dont mention Canterbury because, you said it was awful so i didn't read it.

I was focused on your other stories so i did not finish Equestria Z

Tell me what to help with and i can try for sure
I am only gonna help if you get more involved. When i would edit in gdocs or comment on what to fix you would just dissapear

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Hey! It's not that bad. :rainbowlaugh:

Look, just read it if you want, but if you absolutely hate it with a burning passion, don't tell me about it and don't comment. But if you like it enough, then tell me the issues, and I will tell you my main reason for being what it is, deal?

I knew that they didn't give a shit, I just wanted to sound more modest is all. I don't give a shit if someone tells me they want their work edited.

Lol, I just found out that someone has a crush on me from Tumblr, if they only knew the real me...


DUDE! Add me on Tumblr! Oh my fuck, I'm semi on there bro! We have to add each other! Mine is supercharger2001@tumblr.com. ADD ME!

All I really want you to do is edit my work. I bet your like, "Fuck..."

Yeah, I'm not very open am I? Well, I'll do the best to make this happen at least.

As for Equestria: Z? If you're still interested, fine. If not, than sorry.

I know Nightwolf is busy, that's why I never bother him.

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All I really want you to do is edit my work. I bet your like, "Fuck..."

Well if you really are gonna be gone for 10 friggin weeks, that should be enough time for me to edit some stories.

Im not gonna be as good as NightWolf tho :trixieshiftright:

DUDE! Add me on Tumblr! Oh my fuck, I'm semi on there bro! We have to add each other! Mine is supercharger2001@tumblr.com. ADD ME!

I dont do social media websites i know nothing about Tumblr to boot

Anyways what story did you mean in the beggining? idiots of canterbury?

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Naw, I don't think you comprehended me fully to your expertise in understanding someone's question. I want to like, do each new chapter I make, and I need you to edit them as soon as I'm done. It's very simple on you're end, since you understand things like that. Whereas I, am just good with making up the story and expanding it.

Would you let me teach you Tumblr, my young grasshopper?

1771297

What if you only got on at night time for a bit when your plans for the day have been completed? :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

That could work out fine. :scootangel:

I'm heavily considering this idea.

But then again, it would just serve as an excuse for my laziness. I'm considering the options that are being laid beside me.

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Would you let me teach you Tumblr, my young grasshopper?

Eww
No
....its giving me cancer....

I want to like, do each new chapter I make, and I need you to edit them as soon as I'm done.

I thought you were gonna do a chapter then leave? :rainbowhuh:
I can edit stories for a little while sure i guess (you know im not the best evur) then in a couple weeks i get a job interview :rainbowdetermined2:
Thats when i will be busy as fuck.
So totally take advantage of my sweet body while you have the chance :rainbowwild:

you better appreciate it too :twilightangry2:

but yeah you shouldnt spend so much time on the computer like a failure such as myself :applecry:

You might not be as open as I am, but I think we need to talk about this sometime.

1773688 BRO if you do everything you need/want to do during they day, then relax on your computer at night....

Whats wrong with that?

1773691

You damn right I'm going to take some sweet advantage with that sassy body of your's...:rainbowlaugh:

Nah bro, didn't you read my message, I want to do something vast and totally silly and just create a chapter for each of my stories, and I need your assistance.

You're not a girl, are you...?

.....
.....

.........

Hmm, if I'm right, your name is Joey, and you are a guy. :trollestia:

On the tumblr shtick.

That's exactly my response to Skype and Facebook, *shudder*

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It's a matter of keeping consistency my friend, how far can I truly take it without going off the wagon, and how far can I exceed through it without getting constant sleep disorders.

1773727 SKYPE IS ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS
You can talk to all of your friends in real time, even voice or video chat them
****even some girls ( wink wink)*******

Oh and FUCK FACEBOOK

Nah bro, didn't you read my message, I want to do something vast and totally silly and just create a chapter for each of my stories, and I need your assistance.

A chapter for ALL FIVE???

Lets do MBLS or true addiction first then i will think bout it :trixieshiftright:

1773720

THEY FUCKING TOOK IT! THEY FUCKING TOOK IT! MY IDEA, MY! IDEA! MY IDEA! MY FUCKING IDEA, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT! THEY FUCKING FUCKING FUCKING TOOK IT!

READ THIS! WHY!!!!!!!!

THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT! MY IDEA, MY. IDEA. MY. IDEA.


Guess what?! THE ENDING OF MIND/BODY/LIGHT/SOUND involved Twilight Sparkle being hanged. IT INVOLVED THE BRUTALIST HATE POSSIBLE, THEY TOOK IT, THEY TOOK IT, AND THE ARTWORK!?!?!?!??!?! THE FUCKING ARTWORK! THE FUCKING ARTWORK, just perished my young boy, my old friend. THEY TOOK IT! Not literally! BUT WHY COULDN'T I DO THAT! WHY COULDN'T I SLAP SOMETHING LIKE THAT! THAT WAS MY MASTERPIECE, MINE. MINE. MINE.


THEY TOOK IT, THEY....they...they, I'm done. I'm just done.

THE HANGING OF TWILIGHT SPARKLE! THE HANGING OF TWILIGHT SPARKLE AND THE ARTWORK! The artwork represented drugs, now look at it!

WHY!

1773699 Talk?
sure.

I talk to Corgii alot now.

He is a cool as friend. dude, or kid IDK how old he is >.>

1773775 You are ofcourse :twilightsmile:

Ive always wanted to talk to you and be like a IRL friend.

Me and Corgii talk all the time bout music, girls, you name it.
He also kinda boosts my EXTREMLY LOW self esteem

Will you be on the triangle :rainbowderp:

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Sassy I will, count me in. :yay:

1773767 WHAT THE FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK????

who in the fuck did you tell????
I mean

I just skimmed it real quick and it TOTALLY looked like they did.....

Or was it random coincidence?

THEY EVEN USED YOUR FUCKING COVER ART

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Skype is too sassy for my tastes.

All five indeed. All five indeed.

Okay, MBLS and True Addiction sequel or prequel first.

1773822 I have been asking you to be more than friends fer weeks now ;_:
I talk to corgii lots bout shat

I appreciate you wanting to talk with me about sum shit too :twilightsmile:

1773827 DUDE trust me Skype is awesome

I was borderline racist to the idea of skype magical

Try it
trust me

iT wont let u down

1773767 i refuse to look at it.. ugh

1773824

The story itself seemed totally opposite to what I'm doing. My issue is with the art and the fact that because someone puts up "Hanging" they now are FUCKING FEATURED! I...am...not controlling in the slightest, I stopped when I was younger, wayyy younger, but this is HORSESHIT! FUCKING FUCKING FUCKING HORSESHIT!

Curse me! CURSE ME AND MY AFFILIATIONS FOR MAKING COMPLEX STORIES WITH SUB-PAR GRAMMAR! CURSE THIS PUTRID MIND! GRIM DARK! We have to make this story the most brutalist ever, in both fantastic literature, and an amazing story itself, we have to upshow, we have to rise, we have to take back the system! And my artwork! Well, it wasn't mine but I got it first, and this other person just uses it and now every other cock sucker is going to say I took his artwork! They can probably check the dates and make the assumption for themselves.

Curse this preposterous setback that could end all future setbacks! YOU CAN HAVE THE ARTWORK, YOU CAN TAKE THE IDEA! BUT YOU WILL NEVER STEAL MY EQUESTRIA: Z! MY STORY THAT WAS FORGED IN THE FIRES OF HELL TO ONLY BE BROKEN UP AND RECONFIGURED THROUGH EXTENSIVE MULTILATERAL ANOMALIES AND MONTHS OF PLANNING AND LISTENING TO ALBUMS LIKE ...And Justice For All, YOU WILL NOT STEAL THIS PROJECT THAT I'VE SPENT ENDLESS DAYS CHATTERING MY HEAD AWAY ABOUT! YOU HEAR ME FIMFICTION! THIS STORY WILL BE THE MOST BRUTALIEST ZOMBIE, COMPLEX AND JUST STRAIGHT REALISTIC STORY OUT THERE! THIS STORY SHALL BE MADE!!!! AND IT SHALL BE FUCKING MADE NOW!

I think I have a reason for staying on my computer now.

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What about Tumblr and its vast ways of being just so open?! You must try this really?

1773850

CORGII! The man I'm looking for, we need to chat more, you and I. You know?! Toughen up the friendship. :ajsmug:

1773885 WOAH WOAH WOAH

Just because they used it doesnt mean you cannot :pinkiesad2:

I wanna write about Twilight getting corrupted by dark magic and going APESHIT on her friends and trying to kill Celestia

Been done a thousand times!!!!!!!!!!
and i dont care

I think I have a reason for staying on my computer now

Yaaay :yay:
DUDE i told you, you can spare enough time for the computer at night

You dont have to leave completely for months :pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

1773888 But skype is JUST to talk to people with nothing more :trixieshiftleft:


Fine :trixieshiftright:

Sometime you can show me Tumblr if you will try Skype okay? :twilightsheepish:

1773897 I told him to get his scrawny ass in here :trixieshiftright:

Had to torture him :trollestia:

Nah he didnt know about ur blog and he is sad :pinkiesad2:

1773901

Is there a way that I can tell them to change the artwork, or....


I wouldn't really do it, somewhat, but it feels good to know that I got options.

1773907. In a sense devestated.

1773907

I knew you did! I knew it! Well, I assumed it.

It seems Corgii and you have a tighter relationship than him or I, I might be just a third wheel. :applecry:

1773924 oh come on now :ajsmug:

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