Sapphire Cave: Revised.

I've made some pretty major additions to Chapter Five (and some small ones to Chapter One) in order to smoothe the pacing, tone, and so on, in with the rest of the story. Please feel welcome to leave your feedback, particularly on whether it worked.

Anyway, sorry about the delay. I felt the rewriting was more important than what's coming next.

Comments

[Lady Froey]

Now I can read it.

[Rinnaul]

I've counted them up, and at this point I've posted enough commentary on your story that my comments are long enough to qualify as a fic in and of themselves.

If I've devoted this much time to it, I might as well add it to favorites.