EThe Story of Nyx: A Snowflake in The Wind
MLP: FiM
Romance
Sad
Nyx finds herself in the Pony version of Purgatory after Twilight brings a special mirror to the Library. There she finds the lost soul of an Equestrian hero, Snowdrop.
Crossover
Twilight
OC
Nightmare Moon
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After a long Hiatus I have returned with the completed 9th and final chapter for the recently renamed 'The Story of Nyx: A Snowflake in The Wind'!
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To everyone who read chapter 5 please return to it and reread the new version. its been heavily edited and worked on. It's a lot less awkward and is much better now.
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Updates

My Last finals are tommorrow so ill be able to get back to fixing Chapter 5 of The Story of Nyx: Love of Snowdrop and finishing up Chapter 6!
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Jan

19th

2014

Chapter 5 · 7:37pm Jan 19th, 2014

I was wondering on what people thought about chapter 5. Do you think the way it went needs to be edited or changed? i kinda feel like it was rushed

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Slowbro95

Slowbro95 #1 · Jan 20th, 2014 · · ·

It's good... But It could have been longer. (But I love ling story's And chapters. It's up to you if you wont to make them longer.)
Nyx could have had a more heated argument with her self. And I fell that your rushing your self. I can help with making them longer and other marks.

Shined,
Slowbro95

PS: NyxDrop is best ship!

Golden Sax

Golden Sax #2 · Jan 20th, 2014 · · ·

It's not rushed at all. It only feels that way because there was only one event. It would only be rushed if about 5 things were happening in a very short amount of time. Just remember: there is a difference between a short chapter and a rushed one. The reason people think these are synonymous is because rushed chapters are often short. Just keep doing what you're doing.