After Twilight brings a Saddle Arabian artifact to the Ponyville library, Nyx becomes too curious for her own good. After jumping in she finds herself in the pony version of Purgatory. There she meets the tortured soul of Snowdrop. Nyx tries to comfort Snowdrop and become her friend after over 1000 years of isolation. But with all the challenges ahead will their relationship become more?
Story officially takes place after Season 4
Edited by: lp523
Cover Image: Link
Nyx is from Past Sins by Pen Stroke
Snowdrop:Link
Chapters (11)
hmm ill be watching
beware of hate from this....
weird shipping
I'm kinda stuck in the middle on this one.
Get it?
I'm so sorry...
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interesting, ill stay in touch with this story.
weird shipping never seeing it before and ill stay in touch with this story too and i like it
3599546 PURGATORY? IN THE MIDDLE? GETTIT?
odd......I like it. ill stay in touch with this
If only this were a clopfic, it'd be my dream fic
As is, it's still pretty good; the x-over that should've happened a long, LONG time ago.
Wow. This is pretty good. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
On a different note, I'm curious as to how Nix came to be. Who is Twilight's partner? Please tell me she got pregant because of magic...
Conversation grammar is a bit off. Suggest checking out Ezn's guide.
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Past Sins.
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I'm just gonna say that's a bit rude. I mean, if you're pointing it out to a story that has work put into it I understand but a comment someone take about... not even a minute on? I mean, really? It's a comment. So what if I have a few spelling or grammar mistakes. It's a comment.
Woah. Got a little carried away. Sorry. But yeah, that was kinda rude. Also, just to let you know, I'm writing on an iPod, which is hard enough to write with as it is.
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When people use the "reply to this comment" button (the thing which puts the >> bit in), the relevant text in their response is the bit below the >> (and before any subsequent one).
The part above it is about the story, not your post. The author messes up the conversation grammar a bit, and Ezn's guide has great examples of what and what not to do in that regard. I suggested it so he can take a quick look.
So no worries, not bashing you
The only bit that applies to you is the link to Past Sins, which is where Nyx comes from.
With what this crossover is?
3600106
Err, have you never read Past Sins?
Nyx is an incarnation of sorts of Nightmare Moon. Twilight found her in the woods after she was created and adopted her as her own.
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Oh.
Now I just feel awful and stupid. I'm sorry. I do know how the replie to comment thing works I just thought you made a small error. I completely missed the Past Sins link. Thank you for that by the way. Can't wait to read it.
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Spoilers!!!
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some of the time. 
Glad to help.
We're all a little
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Sorry, dude! That all takes place in the first chapter, if that lessens the blow.
Let me preface this by saying I have not read any of this yet.
1.remember that Pen Stroke said No clop!
2. Nyx has a lot of haters, Snowdrop has a lot of haters. Expect a lot of trolls. Ignore them.
3. Done well this could be very very very good. Hell this could break the record for warm fuzzy feels.
good luck. I will be watching
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man are you in for a treat, you are about to read Past Sins for the first time.. i envy you. . The story has its haters, but I have a feeling you will love it... be forewarned it has a reputation for being an emotional roller coaster.. and said reputation is well earned.
3599587 Don't you fucking dare cancel this story.
I've seen to many good story's end because the crater didn't wont to complete it. Evan if you didn't read Past Sins I feel that this story is going to be grate.
When you have chapter three out I will give it a rating. And yes I do that it's fun for me to give ratings and help others out. Well I'm on a laptop so cant type much so happy trails.
Shined,
Slowbro95
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Just read the prelude or however you spell it and I am quite interested. So far so good.
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it's a crossover between past sins and Snowdrop
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Just googled that video and... err... wasn't Snowdrop filly? And Nyx too?..
Upvoted for sheer effrontery.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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And some readers with preconceptions are about to get a rude awakening. (As the very first comment states: "beware of hate.") I'm a firm believer in shaking things up now and then.
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Snowdrop is filly, Nyx too, "romance" tag... what the buck?!.. F/F?!
3601388lol.
Good.
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alright
Sounds like an interesting concept that I would like to read, but because this is your first story and the first chapter is short, I will have to wait to read it. Once I am adequately convinced you will continue and eventually finish this, I will begin to read it.
I absolutely hate when a story I start reading is abandoned, it's like getting kicked in the stomach.
Oh, and I don't think the crossover tag is needed. I personally think it should only be used for franchise crossovers, not crossovers within the same franchise. Like MLP/some anime, not G4/G1
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When it's about children - yes, problem.
3602767
Not a problem unless things get sexual. I've seen 10-12 year-olds "date" each other and all it consisted of was holding hands, kisses on the cheek, and snuggling up to sleep.
More cute than offensive.
I like the concept. As for if it is a good story...
Convince me
(Kudos if you get the reference above)
3602767
Jesus. It isn't clop. Fillies are like teenagers and preteens. They fall in love and it's adorable, but they aren't going to do adult things. It's like a crush.
Weren't you a child before?
3602755 if it was a f/f, then the legendary mature and sex tag would of been there......
this looks odd.... and, Ungite.
Fav because THIS IS A ONCE IN A LIFETIME ODDITY!?
3603478 well it's not going in THAT direction, it just may get suggestive wth a time skip
I'm on that weird part of Fimfiction again . . .
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Mind putting a thingy on the info that tells what ficts the two characters are from.
Past sins
and Snowdrop (the mlp fan film)
Do want