Time to edit!!

I'm now working on editing the first chapter of Blackmail Crime using the feedback I received from my proofreaders. Yeah I have to work through three individual responses, but I intended for this to happen so I can be sure that my chapters come out as high quality as they can. I know this will be my first fan-fiction here, but that won't stop me from working as hard as I can to get this amazing story out of my head and into text for everyone to see!

Also, I will be working on the prologue once my proofreaders and I are satisfied with the edited version.

Peace out everypony!

Comments

[Secrets and Lies]

Good luck!

[jackal4563]

114696

Thank you! I've been editing on and off throughout the week.

I plan on shortening the dream sequence. Partly to decrease the amount of info given right off the bat, and some of that info can be revealed in more creative ways later on anyway.

[Secrets and Lies]

119557

Sounds like you're heading in the right direction, keep it up!