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Erol carstein


Just a guy with time on his hands really, all I can say is a hope you enjoy what I write

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  • 312 weeks
    Going forward

    After a long hiatus involving drink, drugs, parental divorce, cancer, lots of debt, and an over riding urge to commit suicide, I'm back

    Expect chapter 4 of the heavenfall by the end of next week, to those of you who followed my shining armour stories expect a continuation by the end of the month.

    Thank you for your patience

    Erol

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  • 438 weeks
    hey there guys.

    So it's been a while. ridiculously too long in fact. where have I been? I don't want to say, and what have I done? I don't want to say. I've let most of you down by neglecting to return and finish what I've started, and while I can't promise swift or regular updates, I will try what I can

    6 comments · 522 views
  • 498 weeks
    Guess who's back; back again.

    Erol's back. Tell a friend.

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  • 514 weeks
    GOOD NEWS EVERYONE!

    My laptop finally gets out the maintainence bay today, so expect the next chapter of Heavenfall soon!

    5 comments · 614 views
  • 522 weeks
    A serious question about the escapades of Shining Armour.

    Hey guys.

    Thanks for all your support and encouragement for my Shining Armour series. Just wanting you to know that the next installment is on the way, with Shining Armour heading up north on a diplomatic mission to the Crystal Empire.

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    4 comments · 578 views
Jan
10th
2014

On a Terminal World related note. · 1:00pm Jan 10th, 2014

Hey there folks!

I'm glad that everyone is enjoying Terminal World so far, and I'd also just like to say a quick thanks for propelling me into the feature box, not once, but TWICE! Not to mention all the favourites, thumb ups, and comments you guys have left me. It's great to see my story being received so well!

Anyway, on to business.

At the moment my editor of nine chapters is having a bit of a family issue, so the position of editor is now open. I have put this story in the "looking for editors" group, but if there's any readers out there who would like to be involved, just PM me. Also, I was thinking about doing a complete overhaul of the story synopsis, and I'm just looking for a little feedback from your guys about the current one. Do you think the current synopsis does Terminal World justice, or would you prefer to see something different?

Also, I was thinking about doing a little spin-off story set in the Terminal World universe as a collaboration with another author, but of course only if anyone out there is interested. Pm me if you are!

Once again, thanks for everything. And the next chapter should be up by the end of the month.

Bye!

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Comments ( 4 )

The current one does pretty well for a description, but if there would be a better one, how would it change without keeping a nice short and sweet hook?

As for the spin off, was it more on history, or more towards backstory of main characters?

1702216

I was thinking about a spin off following Donut Joe's original investigation into Twilight, from start to finish, with it eventually culminating in Twilight's confession of her true nature. Also, I have a vague Idea of a Braeburn/Appaloosa based spin-off, but it's safe to say that one is still deep in development.

1702302 that would be a bit of interesting fun, as you really get to see a very different twilight in part.

I'd definitely want to read it!

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