Changes! · 6:54am Jan 10th, 2014
Made some major changes to Chapter 3, along with minor ones to 1 and 2.
After a hearty slap in the face by one of my new pre-readers, I realized that that chapter had quite a lot of problems. It should now be smoother, more cohesive, and less boring as far as expositions go. Also, I got rid of a few unnecessary spots, like Nyx's retelling of Past Sins, which was killing the entire chapter with its tediousness.
I guess I feel like I should keep writing or something, so yeah. But you should totally go read over that chapter again! Or not. I mean, if you can see this, it means you already liked the story enough to favorite it or follow me, so I guess it doesn't matter.
Anyways, I have no more to say, so good night.
Also, semester finals. Gah.
Should I take a bow for giving you the hearty slap?
What, it wasn't me? Bull shit. I worked hard to give you as good a slap in the face as I could.
You're saying it wasn't me... THEN WHO!?
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Yes, go ahead. You can bow.