Chapter 1 · 2:24am Dec 26th, 2013
I've did a complete rewrite of Chapter 1 "Monday Blues" and I would like to hear your opinion of it. Is the original better? Or is the rewrite better?
Beauty never lust long
I've did a complete rewrite of Chapter 1 "Monday Blues" and I would like to hear your opinion of it. Is the original better? Or is the rewrite better?
And also, merry Christmas!
(P.S Christmas is already over, it's yesterday for me due to my location)
Hey Sorry I haven't been able to take a look at the chapters you've sen me yet, been pretty busy with work and stuff I'll try to look over them tomorrow and send them to you in kind.
1648322 Yeah, but don't worry about it. Things are getting busy here in my side too. I completely understand.
P.S The chapter I've sent you is also getting a rework(or maybe a few major and minor edits), so you can skip that one at most. If you don't know which chapter, it's the most recent.