Dec
21st
2013
Second Story and Disappointment. · 6:48pm Dec 21st, 2013
Hello to everyone that reads this! I'm am proud to say that my second story is out! But there is one problem. NO ONE is reading it. Now, that my be a lot to ask of people, considering it is only my second story, but after the way people have raved over my first, I had figure at least more people would read my second. I worked extremely hard on it, and it's laying forgotten in the shadow of it's predecessor. So come on! Give Setting Sky a chance. It needs more love than at this time 107 views.
On a Side note, I will be working through Hearths Warming Eve Christmas to provide you people a new story. It'll be the last for a while, so I hope you'll enjoy it.
While Setting Sky was a good story, I have to say it's not on par with H-hey, It's Me. Not to say that it's bad, but everything from the tone to the cover art is just different. It's all still good, and more people will see it over time but it is it's own story and you really shouldn't measure it's success by your other works. Looks at it this way. You have had over a hundred people look at that story. Now that seems pretty impressive to me. Just keep doing what you enjoy and don't worry about it if you aren't getting quite the turnout you expected.
1631681 You know what, you're right. It's just, this story meant a lot to me, and to see others ignore it is like watching someone take my daughter and using her head as a football.
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There's really nothing for you to worry about. You are well spoken, practice good grammar, and are able to convey a mood very well. I predict that given time you can be among the best authors on this site.
P.S. This is just a personal preference and I almost want to say just ignore it but I would really be interested in seeing you do a multi chapter story. I love your work and look forward to reading more.
1631785 I've been planning one, but I'll keep practicing one shots till I am better suited for a multi-chapter story.
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Sounds like a good plan. I don't suppose I could ask what's in the works for your next story?
1631824 Might be a sequel to H-hey, It's Me, dealing with Fluttershy's nightmares, and explains how she was able to get away from the guy that kid napped her.
It could be anything.
That, or another Rainbow-(who-ever) ship fic.
Or, maybe a random comedy involving Lyra as a mad scientist.
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All sound fun. I can't wait, but I must, at some point I need to comb though your stories to see why it is that I enjoy reading them more. Just something about them is extremely relaxing. I never feel as if I'm forcing myself to read sections. Which is actually surprising for me.
1631884 That may be because when I write, I'm constantly trying see my story in the way the reader would. Many times I have seen writers fail to take time and think about how their stories look to the readers that the stories end up feeling fake and forced.
It really upsets me.
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Well I think I can speak for all of your readers when I say I appreciate the effort.
I guess I can give it a read.