Discordia Girls Overhaul · 8:21pm Dec 18th, 2013
Not entirely certain if this will work, or if it's even necessary, but I've completely overhauled "Chapter 1 - Reflection is Magical" better than doubling its original length. This was primarily for better chapter structuring, as the direction I'll be taking this story has gone from simple lampoon to... well, something more ambitious, but hopefully still just as silly.
I still need to resubmit the story to Equestria Daily for consideration, but in order to do that, I'm going to need someone with detailed punctuation checking knowledge; not simple stuff like, your vs you're, but the heavy duty stuff like catching em-dash use vs hyphens and knowing how to properly format the quotes as I have them applied throughout (though if you do find mistakes like those, point them out!) Admittedly, I think EqD had revamped their review system a bit since my first submission attempt, but I still want to make sure what I have is as cleaned up as I can get it.
I had been sitting on this a while hoping to get some official proof-readers, but so far everyone that seems like a match for my work is either busy or simply hasn't responded.
dis gon b gud