I'm back! Sort of. I've been working on a lot of different projects that I'd hope to upload someday, but unfortunately for me, work, hobbies, relationships and a number of other things seemed to get in the way quite considerably. One of the biggest problems I have had is focusing on a project with little support, and little exposure. Once I get feedback, I really start to get the ball rolling;
So, as you've... probably known for an agonizing long while... I've been working on a new story, set in a future Equestria with steampunk-age technology. I would really appreciate some pre-readers for opinions on the prologue, and possibly an editor, but that's not totally necessary, as I'm comfortable reading some stuff again and fixing it myself.
Do you know what it feels like to be alone... to feel empty... to just never want to wake up again... to just find someone, know matter who, and hold them tight and just cry?
Hey guys, you know how I was thinking about getting some help on my stories and things? WELL, NOW I NEED IT! :3
I'm looking for proofreaders, pre-readers, and people willing to give constructive criticism so when I release my new story it's as refined as possible. I would very much appreciate any help you guys would be willing to give.
(Okay guys, I've finished the VERY LONG description of the story, and I want to see if you think it's well written and entertaining. I also want to tip you guys off about what's actually going on in the story so you have an easier time making and perfecting your OCs. Without further ado, here's the FRICKING DESCRIPTION.)
94714 Both of you please The amount of comment I've had is FAR above 1000... I think... commenting on stories helps TROLOLOOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLL
94778 depends. do you regularly quaff enough caffeine to kill an elephant? do you get a sick kick out of death, mayhem, chaos, extreme gore, and whatnot?
94800 *twitch* YOU DON'T KNOW TH' DIFFERENCE BETWEEN TH' MOST OVERRATED AMERICAN HANDGUN IN HISTORY AND TH' PINNICALE OF GERMAN HANDUN TECHNOLOGY?!?! GET OUT OF MY SIGHT.
although th' Luger was invented during Nazi Germany, so it sucks and jams all th' time. still a damm powerful gun.
94858 if you don't know th' proper method to torture someone via gunshot to th' stomach, lungs, liver, bladder, rectum, large intestine, small intestine, or kidney, then no.
94725 Yeah. I'll send you the link and pass. when I finish the chap. I also owe Crown8 a proofreading, I promised two but I gave one. IDK what gender Crown8 is, so I just went with poor grammar. :|
95072 I guess that's what happens when you're open as a writer and not aloof and in the background. I've said before that I'm along for the ride too, it's just I know all the twists and turns.
you're welcome.
They call me reginald....
94657>>94675 lets be FrIENdS
THANKS TO ME, BRO!
ya got over 1000 comments
94682 i'm already completely insane.
94684 and my and Chuckles's epic comment wars.
94704
I've had over 10 comment wars with Chuckles if not more
Our battles have always ended in draws
BITCH PLEASE
1155 comments.
Wait until I get my 50k chapter out!
94713 ours tend to go on for days, and one time a week.
94714 that reminds me. i'm still proofreading for you, right?
94714
Both of you please
The amount of comment I've had is FAR above 1000... I think...
commenting on stories helps
TROLOLOOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLL
94702 so is that a yes
94778 depends. do you regularly quaff enough caffeine to kill an elephant? do you get a sick kick out of death, mayhem, chaos, extreme gore, and whatnot?
94783 yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes YES
94793 do you know th' difference between th' 1911 and th' Luger?
94796 isn't that a baseball bat
94800 *twitch* YOU DON'T KNOW TH' DIFFERENCE BETWEEN TH' MOST OVERRATED AMERICAN HANDGUN IN HISTORY AND TH' PINNICALE OF GERMAN HANDUN TECHNOLOGY?!?! GET OUT OF MY SIGHT.
although th' Luger was invented during Nazi Germany, so it sucks and jams all th' time. still a damm powerful gun.
94813 shit man I'm no gun expert
I know a thing or two about methods of murder and torture
So that's a no then
94858 if you don't know th' proper method to torture someone via gunshot to th' stomach, lungs, liver, bladder, rectum, large intestine, small intestine, or kidney, then no.
94864 are you from new york
94882 believe it or not, Kentucky.
94896 hmm.....is scootaloo alive our dead
This thread alone is proof as to why you got so many comments.
94725 Yeah. I'll send you the link and pass. when I finish the chap. I also owe Crown8 a proofreading, I promised two but I gave one.
IDK what gender Crown8 is, so I just went with poor grammar. :|
95072 I guess that's what happens when you're open as a writer and not aloof and in the background. I've said before that I'm along for the ride too, it's just I know all the twists and turns.
95094 i see.