Finished with Second Story

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A Quiet Party

[Romance][Comedy]

During one of Pinkie Pie's famous parties, and a bit of drinking, Fluttershy wants nothing more than to have the host of the party all to herself.

I always wanted to write a story for an underrated ship, and FlutterPie was my first choice, so here it is.

This is actually the fastest I've ever wrote and finished something. I'm a very slow writer, and it took about two weeks to finish, although other writers could write good shit in less than three hours. Compared to Another Butterfly Migration, in which I'll be honest, took way longer than it should of have to finish, I consider two weeks to be pretty quick compared to a few months.

Once again, feedback is always welcome. I'd like to know what was good, what I did wrong, and what I can improve on.