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BleedingRaindrops


Just a critic who happens to write about pastel colored magical talking ponies

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  • 160 weeks
    Signal Boost: Bronycon Bookstore 2019!

    If you’re on this site, you’ve probably wondered about making your super amazing fan fictions into a book that people would actually buy or at least publish something in the next millenium.

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  • 166 weeks
    Leaving for a bit

    If you're reading this, I'm off on a long, long field exercise, for a few months, and I won't be able to answer. Don't worry, I'm not dead. I'll be back as soon as I can.

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  • 190 weeks
    The Rain Recedes

    Well, it's been nearly six months since the last update, but I'm considering shutting down "Tales of the Rainmaker". Someone pointed out a lot of flaws in the story that are too well engrained to fix. Part of me wants to continue, because I want to tell her story, but at the same time, that reviewer was right.

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  • 207 weeks
    My Little Pony: The Movie. A (non)spoiler Review (spoilers after the break)

    I just got done watching The My Little Pony Movie and I was so excited I just had to write this. Okay, so this first bit will be spoiler free, and I’ll leave the spoilery bits below the break.

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  • 214 weeks
    Need a long term editor for "The Secret of Ponyville"

    No, this thing isn't dead. The entire plot is written out in a neat three arc format, I just need to fill in the details. The problem is I'm struggling to get a lot of the scenes to hit just right, and early on I relied heavily on input from Web of Hope as he

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Nov
2nd
2013

How Ink Blot dies at the end (drunk edition) · 4:32am Nov 2nd, 2013

Don't worry, I'm not actually spoiling the story. I know you guys are eager to see what's actually going on in this monstrosity I've created. Chapter four is finished and awaiting an editing pass, and I've magically conjured up a plot for chapter five, so there's that to look forward to. In the mean time, enjoy an alternate ending written by a friend of mine who was drunk at the time. We had homemade mead last night, and he heard I'd written a pony story, so he decided he was going to commandeer the final chapter to the story. I might also note that sober this guy is not a fan of ponies (he didn't know I was a brony, and probably still doesn't. I remind you, he was drunk.) So, without much further ado, enjoy what my drunk friend wrote with only the last two paragraphs of chapter three as prompt material:

Applejack turned around for a moment, eyes still wide. “Huh? Me? Uh, I’ll be fine. Just, uh, keep going.” She snapped her head back to its original position and continued to frantically scrub the mugs of cider. Ink Blot thought for a moment, and then went on to tell her about how her mother had left for some pink flower forest. Applejack stopped scrubbing momentarily, then resumed. At the mention of Twilight’s actions, and what she’d said at Zecora’s hut, she actually dropped the mugs. “no” She said, soft enough that Ink Blot almost didn’t hear.

“Um, Aunt Applejack?” Ink Blot started. Her aunt’s head slowly turned to face her. This time, her eyes drooped and she stood a bit shorter, head hung low. She reached up and pulled her hat off, clamping it firmly between her teeth. Ink Blot’s eyes shot open as her aunt slowly tore a section of the hat off, chewed, and swallowed. Then her aunt let out a long sigh.

“This… isn’t a story meant for fillies.”

Ink Blot than slapped her aunt in the face with her udders. “Racist What do you have against fillies!” she shouted as her aunt stumbled back in shock; she continues “They are no different from us for they live in the same world and share the same air and life!”
As Ink Blot begain to charge a second time Aunt Applejack side steps and donkey kicks Ink Blot in the head. “What!” Confused, Apple jack is doing nothing more than trying to defend herself. Unknowing to her Ink Blot has been brought into a flash back from far far ago.
“They only want to live in peace!” Images of fillies crying to her and asking her for help she lashes out in anger kicking both back legs at Applejack.
AppleJack dodging, barely, Ink Blot’s latest attack. “How can I be racist about younger ponies!” Stumbling back into the counter, Ink grabs a chef knife, AppleJack grabs a pan. Parring the first knife thrust. “What is up with you?” she yells while she pushes Ink away.
Ink falls over the conveniently placed stool. “Love is all they want!” She rolls backwards and back onto all fours in one fluent motion, she began to charge Applejack as Ink took a pan to the face. However, this did not stop the knife from reaching that beautiful coat of orange fur.
Now bleeding from a laceration, from neck to shoulder, Applejack charges as well. “ Stop” he yells! Swinging the pan and catching Ink straight in the head. Ink Blot catches the end of that conveniently placed stool with her neck. *Snap* Applejack freezing in shock as if she was hit with a lighting bolt.
Ink Bolt is no longer moving…

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Comments ( 2 )

Wat? . . . I don't even . . . :rainbowlaugh: This was epic in its own weird way.

:rainbowkiss: ahahahaha oh my god man I love this

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