Greetings all. While my current editors are great, time marches on for all, and one has had to bow out due to other matters eating his time. So I am putting this call out for someone with some skill at both proofing and pre-reading/brainstorming to fill in for him.
Since I have been a bit quiet, I figured all of you should get an update. I am working on a new fic, as I mentioned somewhere before... i’m going to be pre-writing several chapters and then posting them on a weekly basis once they are all complete.
Once those start, I will be returning to work on Beyond Equestria, and try to wrap that up.
So after some consideration from comments and my "pain in the ass" editor*, I have decided to unpublish the latest chapter and write a new one to happen before it.
I'd chalk the chitin up to artistic license. As for the state of the bathroom, Spike's really let himself go without Twilight's OCD to keep him in line.
1455568 Yes. You got main idea of a picture. I conceived to show Twilight`s psychological condition in this moment. For her all of this is one big Silent Hill. Take a cookie
1455479 I ask to forgive me a liberty with chitin. I wanted to underline Twilights nature, to add additional elements in appearance of the character. Besides warm colour of chitin and wings have done some inrichement to a picture.
1457040 Indeed. The composition would have been a bit cold in appearance without the chitin's color, but wouldn't that fit the feeling of the situation?
Also, wasn't part of her cutie mark changed to orange as well? It's a good illustration, regardless.
What's with the armor and rundown bathroom?
Still, very nice...
I wish I could do that visual art thingy...
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Yeah... I thought that hive didn't have chitin.
Also, that bathroom is more reminiscent of Silent Hill than Ponyville.
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I'd chalk the chitin up to artistic license. As for the state of the bathroom, Spike's really let himself go without Twilight's OCD to keep him in line.
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... I'd believe that. It's certainly a "Silent Hill" situation for Twilight, it's so... untidy!
1455568
Yes. You got main idea of a picture.
I conceived to show Twilight`s psychological condition in this moment. For her all of this is one big Silent Hill.
Take a cookie
1455479
I ask to forgive me a liberty with chitin. I wanted to underline Twilights nature, to add additional elements in appearance of the character. Besides warm colour of chitin and wings have done some inrichement to a picture.
1457040
Indeed. The composition would have been a bit cold in appearance without the chitin's color, but wouldn't that fit the feeling of the situation?
Also, wasn't part of her cutie mark changed to orange as well? It's a good illustration, regardless.
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Also, wasn't part of her cutie mark changed to orange as well?
ah buck....