I need your help! · 4:53am Oct 25th, 2013
This just on my maybe list, but I need to know if this is a good description.
At an abandoned old facility in Ponyville, lies a orange coat, purple mane Pegasus named Scootaloo. Who so happens get dragged into an arson investigation as the key suspect.
So what's your thoughts on this?
good premise. id have to read more to give a in depth thought but it sounds solid imo.
I like it. However, it does need some editing so that it reads:
At an abandoned, old facility in Ponyville lies a orange coated, purple-maned pegasus named Scootaloo, who just so happens to get dragged into an arson investigation as the key suspect.
i think Pump It Up's edit is pretty good
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I do too also thanks for the fav and watch
1452728 no problem