Here we go... · 10:07pm Apr 4th, 2012
Okay, the dice have been rolled. I've submitted this fix to EqD, and I'm waiting for a pre-reader response currently.
In terms of bug-fixes, I've systematically de-capitalized the words 'pegasus' and 'unicorn', because they're clearly not proper nouns and I don't know why I made them such in the first place. I've also patched up a couple of grammar issues, as well as plot/canon holes, such as that strange moment where Dash states the Fluttershy lives in a treehouse, rather than a cottage. I've got my fingers crossed at this stage, and I'll let you know if it works out or not.
Also, the first chapter of Part Three is fully synopsis'd and in the works.
Gl with it then.
I would say, the story is better then most of the Fics from EqD. Not done with every chapter, but I started with the story only yesterday...
Still got a bad feeling atm where this story is going... Hopefully I'm wrong.
Well, good luck!
I wouldn't get too down if you fail, though. A Bluebird's Song is one of the best MLP fanfictions I've read.
Thanks a lot guys!
Still awaiting the pre-readers.