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  • 82 weeks
    Nightmare Moon AU

    I keep musing about ways Cadence being canon before S2 could have fun influences on fics and the story but I just had an idea for an AU where upon returning Nightmare Moon steals the Elements of Harmony before anyone even gets close to them. Twilight and company still become friends, but then they barely escape the castle being collapsed on them and have to be saved by Zecora; as they recover,

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  • 472 weeks
    Original Fiction Idea

    Anyone who has been following my blog recently may have noticed I posted a rather detailed fic concept, for anyone who missed it there should be a link in the side bar to the various post.

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  • 474 weeks
    DBZ Aftershock Characters: Kin, Pepper & Villains

    The primary antagonist! I've temporarily named her Kin for another OC I adored.

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  • 474 weeks
    DBZ Aftershock Characters: Azure & Isheen

    Azure, (filler name) the Samurai psychic. Azure in a tall, blond-ish haired man/woman (I originally planned woman but am thinking maybe guy now) is based of General Blue from the Mystic Adventure movie, both in appearance and uniform. (Blue was nominally a good guy in that film so food for thought.) They may be a reincarnation, maybe not, chances are folks wouldn't mention it or notice unless

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  • 474 weeks
    DBZ Aftershock Characters: Yancy & Ran

    Set up For Cast:

    The story follows a new generation of 'heroes'. Though most of them are more aptly called protagonists and in come cases are outright antagonists. Some of this cast fall under the guidance of Bulma, Korin and Roshi while others have their own support networks & agendas.

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Jul
24th
2013

Cadence!Verse: An Announcment and a Request · 4:55pm Jul 24th, 2013

Hello anyone and everyone reading this blog post; I just want to say thank you, to everyone who's been following the Cadence!verse Blog. I want to thank you for your suggestions, your advice, your friendly and encouraging comments, everything, I never would have found the motivation or the will to get anywhere with this project if not for everyone one of you.

And that also leads me to some, I would like to consider, good news! I have finally finished my first draft of a C!verse story, I know it's been a long, long time coming, but finally we're nearing the end-zone, or the starting zone now that I think about it! But that's not important and I want to say thank you to everyone who's been here, whether you've been reading these from the start or only just started, I appreciate it all and I hope if you get the chance to read it that you will enjoy the story.

Which is what leads me to my request, hopefully by tomorrow, or by the end of the weekend I will have finished my own editing and I was hoping to ask if anyone whose interested would be willing to beta for grammar and spelling? I'd like to give who ever would be willing to help me with this as much creative freedom as possible, so if you do want to accept i'll happily send the story by email or Googledocs if that's a preferred method.

After that, I would like to do something that I hope is interesting and that will show both how much I appreciate your guy's opinions and hopefully offer a better reading experience overall. I would like to open up the story to you guys before publishing it so you can read it and tell me what you like, what you don't what you think I should include, change or improve upon. I want a story you can all enjoy and I want it to be the best it can be, so if you guys like the idea then I would love to hear your thoughts and thanks again.

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I'd love to proofread it.

I'd love too offer whatever help/advice I can, but grammar/spelling specifically isn't exactly my strong suit. Still, I'm sure you remember what it was like working together back on the Red Magician's Crown fic, so you can decide if that's the kind of help that would do you any good here. :twilightsheepish:

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Thank you! I really appreciate this, especially considering how much writing you're all-ready doing. I do feel I must warn you this story isn't the one I initially discussed with you, I still intend to write Parsprites in the city, but I was struggling too much with the characters and a character building exercise became a story. :twilightblush:
Thanks again though I really appreciate this, do you want me to send you a copy of the fic through email/PC or just give you the password or upload it to Googledocs? I'm OK with whatever you prefer.

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Once the grammar and spelling is taken care of, I'll happily hear your thoughts on the fic, I really value your opinion and would love to hear your thoughts and suggestions for any possible improvements I could make.

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Will eagerly await. Until then, best of luck.

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Thanks! I'll be looking forward to it. :pinkiehappy: Also thank you for your advice with Redheart it really helped with that chapter.

Me. I am great at grammar! Wait, I should read the rest first... :twilightsheepish:

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:rainbowlaugh: If the offers open I appreciate it greatly, I think RDD offered (i'm quite sleepy so I can't remember if proofreading would involve the grammar) but i would be happy to have more than one persona look over my grammar and spelling regardless, sadly they aren't my strong suit. :twilightblush: So thank you, i'll contact once I hopefully complete my own edits. What method of viewing/delivery would suit you?

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Hmm...password to view it on this site is probably best.

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All right, I'll send it to you via PM, once I finish my own edits, I don't want to be too embarrassed :scootangel:

1232874 Well... View password please?

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Cool, TY, once I finish my own edits i'll send it to you.

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Hey there, I was just wondering about your thoughts as to the Cutie Mark Chronicles story I sent you? :scootangel:

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