Update #22: SNEAK PEEK! Chapter 8: Sharing The News · 6:34pm Jul 16th, 2013

Hey guys how are you doing? Right now, I'm to you from Hawaii. Yep, I'm in Hawaii. I'm on a vacation with my family right now,and so far it's been great!I've made some pretty good progress so far on Chapter 8. And to prove it, here's a a little sneak peek.

Chapter 8: Sharing The News

Rainbow Dash trotted her way towards Sugar Cube Corner, excited to meet up with the others. She hummed a soft tune as she passed by Ponyville's shops. Rainbow remembered Rarity's reaction after she broke the news to her.

"I'd like to commission a dress."

Rarity sat still for a moment with her mouth hanging down, and eyes wide. She remained like this for a matter of seconds until she spoke up. "So you want to order... a dress?" Rainbow simply nodded in response.

"Out of all the ponies here in Ponyville, why do you want to order a dress?" Rarity questioned.

Rainbow took a moment to relax, preparing for what was coming ahead. "I-I'm going on date," she stated. In response, Rarity smiled gleefully.

"Who's the lucky stallion?" Rarity asked in a teasingly manner as she raised her brow.

Rainbow Dash gulped, bracing herself for Rarity to have one of her freak outs. "Aden."

Rarity looked to her in awe, putting the pieces of the puzzle together. Then, it clicked. "A-Are you going confess to him?"

Rainbow Dash knew what was coming, and she was ready for it. "Yes. Yes I am." And just a second later, it came.

"Oh my stars, you're finally going to confess to him! This is absolutely marvelous!" Rarity screamed as she jumped up and down around Rainbow's chair. She grabbed Rainbow on the shoulders and pulled up onto her hooves. "We simply must tell the others."

Rainbow shook her head to set her mind straight only to be interrupted by Rarity again. "Meet me tomorrow at Sugar Cube Corner. I'll tell the girls to meet us there," Rarity said, pushing Rainbow to the door.

"Um, sure sounds like a plan."

"Perfect! Now rest up, you have a big day ahead of you." And before she could even respond she was outside, the door quickly shutting behind her. She stared back at the door, asking herself what just happened. But all she knew is that she had some explaining to do.

She continued her way towards her destination, walking by familiar parts of the town. And just down the street was Sugar Cube Corner. She made it to the front of the store and looked to the door.She trotted up the stairs and took a deep breath. And with a push the door opened. She looked around the shop, in search of her friends. Rainbow found them in their usual spot as they chatted away. This was it, it was time to tell them the big news.

So Rainbow Dash sucked up all of her doubt, and walked towards the table...

That's all that I'm gonna tease for now, I wouldn't want to spoil anything else. I hope you enjoyed it. ~ LuigiBoy781

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