Cleanups and Equestria Daily attempt. · 9:46pm Apr 1st, 2012
Now the story's hit the end of part 2, I've decided to go back and do some spring cleaning for the next few days. I'm basically going to pick through the story for spelling/grammar/plotting issues, and fix them up. (There are one or two plot points I need to make clearer, given that it's now over 100,000 words and has got pretty convoluted.) I'm also probably going to go through and de-capitalize all instances of the words Pegasus and Unicorn, because they're not proper nouns and I'm stupid for making them such.
Don't worry, this should only take a few days and it won't put off the start of part 3 by too long. The main reason I'm doing this is because I'm submitting this story to Equestria Daily soon. I tried once already, back when it was only 1 chapter on DeviantArt, and the main comments were 'fix Dash's dialogue', and 'stop capitalizing random words for no reason'.
I know it's more saucy in places than EqD normally post, and also that any experienced writer could probably poke a lot of holes in the style of it, so I'm aware the chances aren't ideal. But hey, it's worth a shot, surely. (Also, they posted Triple X, so the sauce might not be too much of a problem, particularly as it's mostly implied.)
