Story Update: Twilight's Voyage!

So, finally got round to rewriting Twilight's Voyage.

Synopsis:
Sci-fi AU. Twilight Sparkle has lived on the Cantalot Space Station, capital of the Solar Empire, all her life. But can she adapt and make friends when her teacher, Princess Celestia, sends her away to be the new science officer of the spaceship Ponyville on its voyage to explore the galaxy for much needed resources for the war against the Confederacy of Species?

What do you think of it?

I've also written a load of Data Files/Codex Entries as back ground information, but I'm not sure where to put them—In a seperate chapter in the story, or as blog post's here. What do you guys think?