HEY, I need your opinion on something!

So, basically, the problem is this. I want to write To Dream is Divine sometime in the foreseeable future, BUT how I wrote In Search of Knowledge bothers me.
The choice is this:

I will either A: re-write In Search of Knowledge, changing some things, making it overall better, while still keeping the story the same. Major plot elements will not be changed, just have the time frames changed. Like, I would want to make the actual writing of the book last throughout multiple chapters, cut out a lot of the fluff that makes up the first four chapters, and I want to change the overall time. Instead of being at the end of the year, I want to be at the beginning. Hopefully, it could come out better

Option B: I go back in and touch things up. Add description (or take it away), rewrite some dialog, add action to the dialog to make it seem less like a phone call, and more like an actual conversation, et cetera.

Either way, the sequel is still planned, after I finish up another project or two, Not All is as Sweet is growing, whereas TLHoaFN hasn't moved, at all. On top of it all, I have an experimental new project, that may or may not actually ever get finished.

So, yeah, no matter what I decide, To Dream is Divine will get written, just depending on what I do to Not All is as Sweet, it might start differently.

Any help you could give would be great, vote down in the comments.

-thehalfelf

Comments

[thehalfelf]

Vote me up for a total rewrite!

[thehalfelf]

Vote me up for a face lift of what is already there!