Edit, edit, edit... edit...

...and finally publish.

Chapter 14 of Pearl's Travels 2: Canterlot is up.
It's the first chapter that wasn't half-finished on drive, so let me know if you spot anything which needs more editing.

Reading back through the first story and what was published from this one, I see so much in the way of spelling and grammar which could be fixed up... let's not even start on the fixes I could throw at the plot if I were to do a full rewrite.

I wonder why people liked it. Anyone want to drop some comments here to let me know?