Proof reader needed!

I need somone to have a look at the first six or seven chapters in https://www.fimfiction.net/story/545924/team-superstars-winds-of-change (you can go a bit further if you wish, but no further than the 10th chapter, anything unpublished under that is riddled with errors as they are incomplete)

I had unpublished a few of the early ones to fix them up, but need some people to have a look through them. Since I am having a bit of trouble deciding if I should keep the chapter “Pega-suspicions” or remove it. Plus with what else I should add or fix up

You only need to know the G5 characters that appear in Make Your Mark since it doesn’t follow TYT or the comics

I will give you the unpublished view password

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[JD1]

If you still need someone to look it over, I’d be willing to lend my assistance.

[Lulamoon-Crystal]

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