Polishing up Part One.

Having improved my proof reading throughout the writing of Part Two and into Part Three of Marking the Generations. I've now gone back to Part One and given it some more love.

The changes made are minor but I've picked up on more incorrectly spelt words. I've also adjusted the sentence structures in some cases. I plan to also give Part Two another look to make that stronger too.

So, for anyone put off by any incorrectly used or spelt words. Please do give Part One another try.

EMarking the Generations – Part One

• MLP: FiM
• MLP Gen 5
• Adventure
• Mystery

A reimagining of the later stages of the Make your Mark series. Follow the adventures of Sunny, Hitch, Izzy, Zipp, Pipp and Misty as they meet two ponies from the past, Starlight Glimmer and Sunset Shimmer. Then try to find the Elements of Unity.

• Crossover
• Alt. Universe
• Sunset Shimmer
• Starlight Glimmer
• Sunny Starscout
• Mane 5
• Misty

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