About that deleted chapter... · 7:51pm Nov 3rd, 2023
Remember when I said I was deleting more than half of what I had for S1:E3 and rewriting it?
Well, turns out it was waaaay more than over half. It was nearly the entire chapter save for 800 words!!! Soooo, I have much more writing to do than I thought, at least 1 ten-page paper due in less than 2 weeks, some books reviews for books I haven't read, a midterm I still have to take (eek...), and lots of other things I've been procrastinating besides writing for FimFiction. So to bide some time, I'm gonna post the redacted chapter anyways and you'll get the real one later.
Enjoy this little (3.8k word) deleted chapter!
Additional note, it is the whole chapter I had so far, not just the deleted part. So you may see that the beginning in the real chapter is exactly the same until Luna says "I've got it!"
