Finaly the rock ... has punned again. · 7:49pm Nov 1st, 2011
Chapter 4 is up. this will be a a hiatus for a bit as i go back and redo chapters 1-3 and maybe see more stuff i need to clean in 4.
I am still trying to get my story posted on EQD but it seems i need a lot of work still. I've dropped the italics as speach for chapter 4. I also brought in a line break when the time line shifted.
I feel i am getting away from the darker tone of the first chapter with these later ones. But ive gotten to the point i am three chapters ahead of where i need to be writeing down plot ideas and hooks . I know exactly where i am going with this . Its the getting there thats a problem . heh .
Also chapter 4 will make the end of the rock pun titles..... maybe I might have a few more.
chapter 5 is already in the works but i doudt i will post it until i get the other chapters straightend out . of course i said that to myself about 4 as well.
Feel free to leave feedback , complaints what ever I need some help with problems i have .
