EColonel Hooves and the Empire of Crystal
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
Idol Hooves is tasked with rebuilding the Crystal Guard.
Alt. Universe
OC
Cadance
Shining Armor
Changelings
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5 weeks
Not dead, here's a snippet to make it up.

While I've been taking a really long break, I'm still writing while I can. Looking back, I was pushing a chapter nearly every month, and it finally caught up with me. Because of this, I'm trying another approach I've wanted to do for awhile, which was waiting until the story was finished first before publishing it slowly over a couple of weeks. For Colonel Hooves, there will be three chapters
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37 weeks
Colonel Hooves nearing the end, what are some plot points you feel need addressing?

Hello people!
Chapter 28 is finished, and I'll be starting the edits real soon, and with its completion I was left with the realization the story is finally reaching the end. I suspect another two chapters minimum before I write up an epilogue to wrap the story up, and this left me in a spot...
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39 weeks
Colonel Hooves chapters being resumed.

Hello, I just wanted to make a quick post that after taking a break to focus work on another story, that I'll be resuming work on Colonel Hooves. I'm about 6k into the next chapter with a possible 5k more to be added.
Here's a sneak peek!
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56 weeks
Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 Preview.

Just a small preview of the upcoming chapter, and I'm happy to note we passed 5k words and are on trajectory to reaching 10k very soon!
“Order and Harmony, how can a single room fill me with such disdain to work, and actively seek a reason to escape its encompassing walls?”
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57 weeks
Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 update.

Nothing extraordinary to say other then the changes have taking effect for good. My chapters will be much longer then before so be ready to read some chunkers in the coming months, because chapter 27 is already 4k words and all of that is just talking filler and none of the plot. I'm projecting another 10-12k chapter by the end of the month.
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Colonel Hooves Chapter 25 touch up. · 3:53pm Feb 20th, 2023

There was a comment by a user calling out the declining interactions between characters in favor of using Idol's internal dialogue to carry the story forward, and after some reflection, I could agree with it. So, I went back and changed some things that has effect the direction of the chapter to the point I would encourage you reread it again.

If you do reread the chapter, please let me know what you think of the changes!

Cheers!

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More Blog Posts35

5 weeks
Not dead, here's a snippet to make it up.

37 weeks
Colonel Hooves nearing the end, what are some plot points you feel need addressing?

39 weeks
Colonel Hooves chapters being resumed.

56 weeks
Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 Preview.

57 weeks
Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 update.

Colonel Hooves Chapter 25 touch up. · 3:53pm Feb 20th, 2023

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5 weeks Not dead, here's a snippet to make it up.

37 weeks Colonel Hooves nearing the end, what are some plot points you feel need addressing?

39 weeks Colonel Hooves chapters being resumed.

56 weeks Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 Preview.

57 weeks Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 update.

Colonel Hooves Chapter 25 touch up. · 3:53pm Feb 20th, 2023

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5 weeks
Not dead, here's a snippet to make it up.

37 weeks
Colonel Hooves nearing the end, what are some plot points you feel need addressing?

39 weeks
Colonel Hooves chapters being resumed.

56 weeks
Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 Preview.

57 weeks
Colonel Hooves Chapter 27 update.