MORE NEWS ON: The punishment must always fit the crime · 4:39pm Dec 14th, 2022
Hello everyone, I got some big news I wish to share with you. The story of Punishment is going through some changes. Now don't take that too seriously, because is not at all what you think.
Allow me to explain.
In my last blog Here. I told you about the next upcoming chapter. I also mentioned that it will take us back before RD's seven days of fun starts. Where we will follow the princesses as they address the military.
I been thinking a lot on exactly how I want this chapter to go, because I have so many ideas I want to showcase but putting them all in this chapter alone would be ridiculous.
But after some pondering, I thought of a way that will work.
Basically, Things are going to get changed around and retold, so I can build a better linear story and with only two chapters up, it will be easy.
The plan is to go back and make a new chapter line but connect them properly to keep the flow going.
For example, chapter 1 will mostly stay the same, with some new elements, but will be cut short and continue on with what will be the new chapter 2, which is the brand-new chapter I am writing, and what is chapter 2 now will become the new chapter 3 but will be whole new chapter as well in away.
Let me show you.
Chapter 1: The Day of the young flier competition.
This chapter will mostly stay as is but will be cut short. It will have a couple new elements added.
Chapter 2: Fleetfoot puts her foot down and calls Sunset out on her Bullshit.
The name pretty much speaks for itself.
Chapter 3: Rainbow Dash's 7 Days in heaven and hell, mostly hell.
RD returns to Ponyville and tells Rarity everything that happened during her stay in Canterlot.
Chapter 4: A Pony in a Dog Sex Show
Rarity goes out hunting for gems. You all know what happens next.
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And that's it for now. Sorry if this wasn't more detailed. I'm half asleep while writing this.
I plan to have the first two chapters come out as soon as I finish the new chapter. If you have any questions don't hesitate to ask, maybe next time I'll explain things about each chapter more in my next blog.
Anyway, until next time.
