Nov
1st
2022
Reviewing random fanfictions · 2:56pm Nov 1st, 2022
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/315935/thinking-about-apples
This one was really adorable, though it did not go much into the character development beyond just a few scenes. I liked it though. It felt warm and cozy to read, and it definitely serves as an interesting way to analyze the characters.
It kind of reminds me of experiences I did not have back in the day, like going on dates or even hanging out with friends at a donut shop. It reminds me a lot of the young adult fiction back in the 2010s where people would often go to their coffee shops, or just take walks with autumn leaves getting mentioned throughout the chapter.
Overall, a 10 out of 10 for cuteness and maybe a 5 out of 10 for character development :)
