Short sweet story about a friendship and romance · 10:14am Nov 3rd, 2022
I personally liked this story a lot. In my own personal experiences though, letting someone take your hand is a lot better than just grabbing their hand, but that might be getting too much into my offline personal life.
I thought this was a short story, a nice read that fits nicely into a relaxing day, but not too heavy or complex at the same time. The characters were very true to their on screen selves. The dialogue was not overdone, and the mentions of the other students were just light enough that you could get a sense of the mood of the story without clogging it up with details.
I would say 2/10 for realism, because again it isn't the most accurate portrayals of how high school relationships or even high school friendships work out.
7/10 for writing and plot though, because I enjoyed reading this slightly oversaturated account of how my high school years felt in my personal, offline life.
