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Poke-A-Dot


Account created May 26, 2014. Formerly known as PinkKoala.

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  • 52 weeks
    My First Lesbian Crush (in real life)

    Back in 2014, I had my first lesbian crush. Before that, I don't remember having a crush on many people. My first lesbian crush happened in 2014 and I liked a girl who was one year older than me. Her name was Elvina, and she spoke fluent Russian. She also had blonde hair and grey eyes.

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  • 78 weeks
    In The Lab

    “You’re awkward, you’re asocial, and even though we celebrated you joining the mathletes and the chess club because we’ve gone undefeated for years, you never became part of our group. I sometimes say things like ‘you should try not speaking in public’ not out of malice, but— but because I want you to be part of the group. I want you to open up to us, to laugh and smile and celebrate and

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  • 78 weeks
    Reviewing Labcoat

    I don’t want you to go to CHS,” Sugarcoat clarified. She pushed herself from the door frame but stayed standing in the doorway itself, blocking any exit. Her face dropped.

    I interpret this as Sugarcoat representing Twilight Sparkle's subconscious and her conscience.

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  • 78 weeks
    Short sweet story about a friendship and romance

    The story

    I personally liked this story a lot. In my own personal experiences though, letting someone take your hand is a lot better than just grabbing their hand, but that might be getting too much into my offline personal life.

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Nov
4th
2022

Reviewing Labcoat · 7:01am Nov 4th, 2022

I don’t want you to go to CHS,” Sugarcoat clarified. She pushed herself from the door frame but stayed standing in the doorway itself, blocking any exit. Her face dropped.

I interpret this as Sugarcoat representing Twilight Sparkle's subconscious and her conscience.

“B-but why? There’s so much for me there, and so little left for me here. Those girls hardly knew me but gladly welcomed me and shared advice and— and they didn’t even seem phased that I turned into a,” Twilight looked down as tears stung the corners of her eyes, “a demon.”

This version of Twilight seems so full of guilt, and can't get over the fact that she had transformed into a horrifying demon. I would understand too, if something like this happened to somebody, and they became someone they didn't want to be.

Twilight shakes her head. “I just don’t understand. You’ve said some unkind things to me, how I suck at archery or public speaking or joining in with everyone to make me release that magic—”

Interesting here how Twilight starts getting flustered as soon as Sugarcoat grabs her arm, when she also mentions how Sugarcoat has bullied her in the past for her hobbies and interests.

Twilight didn’t shy away from Sugarcoat’s hands and nodded slowly; her eyes were transfixed on Sugar’s and how her silvery-white and blue streaked hair obscured anything else but the insistent, intense orchid eyes piercing into her own.

The way Sugarcoat's eyes here get described as opposed to how Twilight feels contrasts so sharply. Her eye colour gets described as "silvery-white" and her hair as "blue streaked" which do seem beautiful when described, yet her eyes also get described as being "intense" and "orchid" while also "piercing into Twilight's eyes".

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