Screw it, wrote a one-shot (feedback appreciated)

So, anyone who knows me, knows I have severely slowed down in my writings through the years. What used to be a weekly thing slowly became what I call "my yearly quota". This year's story, just like the last one, came to me in the shower. However, instead of my grieving of a horrible national tragedy, this one was about my less serious grievances over the trolley problem and utilitarianism in general.

So, I decided to change the tune this time and just write whatever insanity came to me this time. Half joking, half serious, and all of it only works by rule of cool. I was also writing at 03:00 a.m., so coherence is a wee bit incoherent. The result was basically a filler episode of JoJo's Bizarre adventure with six minor villains from MLP filling in for the Stardust Crusaders. I hope you enjoy:

TTrixie's Bizarre Adventure: Ash Witches

• MLP: FiM
• JoJo
• Adventure

Trixie joined a peculiar group in their quest for an ancient power. But when they fall for an enemy's trap, she will have to take an impossible decision.

• Violence
• Alt. Universe
• Gilda
• Trixie
• Flim and Flam
• Sunset Shimmer

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Seriously, though, I'd really appreciate some comments on it. I know I'm rusty as all hells with my writings, and I'd like the talk too.

Also, I spent more time drawing these character models than I did writing the chapter. So, enjoy them too: