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I like writing. It's the thing that drives me. My goal is to reach others through my work and have a nice talk. He/Him.

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Ever since Princess Twilight Sparkle's coronation, a subtle shadow has loomed over Equestria. As it would happen with such a big change in the world, her new reign has started many smaller ones. Some will be for good.

Some won't.

Trixie has just discovered the emergence of a great evil that's taking advantage of these changes. Such a monster will stop at nothing to grab any power it can.

Unless the magician can stop her.

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Comments ( 6 )

*Shivers*

Dude I know you may not feel it.... but you still got the skill.

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Eh, let's call it a draw. I'm definitely still out of focus.

Nicely written and very dark.

You know, when I saw the title, Trixie character tag, and the new great evil, my first thought was "Is her evil sister, Checker Monarch from GBoYH gonna be in this?" And I called it!

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I used to be subtle, I swear. Though, there's an indication I'm still out of focus. A better tittle would have been stalemate, or look up a type of chess gambit that applies.

Anyhow, glad you liked it.

What a very exquisite story, I must say that you have done an excellent job with the writing on this one. I actually have heard of The “Trixie's Gettin' Back On Her Hooves” universe but I am unsure whether it is a good read or not. Would you by any chance recommend this series, from a reader’s perspective or not? Also, the story and how it develops are excellently well done. The only suggestion that I could give you to make it even better would be to make a sequel one shot that goes over the aftermath of this event. After all, the deaths of two ponies, one the head of a massive corporation and the other a distant friend of Twilight would most certainly be a headline story for the papers, wouldn’t you agree? I would love to see the various reactions that Twilight and friends would have about such a event. That’s all I have to say for now, once again thank you for the absolutely excellent story.
Kind regards,
SonicDJM

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I've only read the original fic, and the Magic Duel sequel. Both are great reads, and high ranking in my personal favorites, so of course I recommend them.

IDK about a sequel, though starting with the journalist perspective sounds like a tempting idea.

Glad you enjoyed the read.

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