Well, this is embarrassing.

Ahem... never mind, whatever. The main reason I'm posting this is I just felt like checking up on my fimfiction, which I haven't touched in a while, and logged in to find I've broken thirty likes! Good God! Break out the good tea-set!

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Phew... been a long time hasn't it?

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And here we have Outmode at his most splendiferous. I literally just recieved his portrait from the equally splendiferous Tatter Tail, and as you can probably guess I'm a great fan of his work

I'll have the next chapter up tonight, sorry about the wait, exams 'n' stuff. Here, have this song, it seems to work.

I'm going to be embroiled in exams for the next few days, but rest assured I'm still writing when I get the chance. I'll also be running through what I've got and making small changes and correcting errors. My heartfelt thanks for your support.

Oh you ponies are going to love chapter five...

Ok so I got a little overexcited and slung that chapter up without checking it. I have successfully and for the first time (I hope) made a complete prat of myself. But I vow upon my malformed imagination that I shall have it ready tomorrow, it being too late now and whatever I write would be tainted by exhaustion.

I humbly beg your forgiveness.

Edit: Ok, sorry for all that rubbish. Here's a chapter for you.

Hello again my children...

I have made a few minute changes. Thanks to the excellent advice I have received I decided to extend the introduction and combine it with the preface, to give the story a little more preemptive punch. To reward your kindness I shall sling another chapter your way. Keep putting in the boot of criticism!

Edit: Whoops, just spotted a glaring error in the new chapter. Please be patient, normal service will be resumed shortly.

One of my biggest fears concerning my work is that, well, does it work? Does the writing flow? Or not? Do the sentences conjure imagery or nausea? So, I would be eternally grateful if those who read it could leave some feedback. I need to know what's wrong, so I can correct it, and what's right, to both drive away the constant nerves and prop up my fragile ego.

If you are at all reading the damn thing, you are officially a splendid person. Thank you.