Recent Changes · 8:22pm May 21st, 2013
Hello again my children...
I have made a few minute changes. Thanks to the excellent advice I have received I decided to extend the introduction and combine it with the preface, to give the story a little more preemptive punch. To reward your kindness I shall sling another chapter your way. Keep putting in the boot of criticism!
Edit: Whoops, just spotted a glaring error in the new chapter. Please be patient, normal service will be resumed shortly.