-WILL EDIT THIS STORY LATER- (Someone gave me a critique for it, so I'm going to edit this and change it up.)
Rainbow Dash comes to spend time with her best friend Fluttershy, when suddenly she forgot to something very important so she goes out in a horrible snowstorm to retrieve it. Things takes a sudden sad turn of events when Rainbow is gone for a loonnngg while....

(this is my first fanfiction, so please critique it. I want to become a better writer too, and I really want someone to like my story. :) )