Okay... I am putting this story on hiatus and here is why. After a lot of thinking, and some feedback from two of my fav authors on this site, plus a couple of other things, I have come to realize that while my story is liked and good, it is badly in need of revision. Two of the most successful authors on this site both have said the same thing; My story has a lot of potential, but they pointed out a laundry list of things that subtracted from my story I had no idea were even there. This being

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After a two week break, all I can say is that it feels good to be writing again. My brain has finally quit rebelling, and I can now focus on my writing once again! All that said, I owe a big amount of thanks to Sonic Mario3 for helping me while I was quelling my brain rebellion. I am working on Chapter 5 right now, and I am hoping to have it done soon.

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Okay, I just wanted to put this out there for all of you. I know it has been a while since my last chapter, and I just wanted to let you all know that it will be coming. When exactly I do not know, but it won't be that much longer until it is finished. Thank you for your patience.

Hey everypony. You ever have one of those days where you brain is not cooperating with you? Well I have been feeling like that since I got chapter 4 done. So, my Co-Author,

Sonic Mario3

is going to be taking care of the next chapter. Take a look at some of his stories too. I have said this before, and I will say it again; if it were not for this guy, I would not even be writing my story.

Okay everypony, listen up. I have about 5 different ideas banging around in the space known as my brain, that I could go with for chapter 5. Problem is, they all sound interesting, and I have a migrane trying to figure out which one I want to implement.

The first and most obvious path that I could take for chapter 5 is to continue where Ch 4 left off.

Path # 2: There is a scene that I have alluded to in the comments about certain ponies that have been wanting to tell Rarity off.

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Man, I worked overtime to get this done. Like I said before, I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. I cannot express how grateful I am to you guys. Your feedback and patience have helped me immensely.

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I know that I said that I would have Chapter 4 done by today, but inspiration hit me like a Semi while I was writing it. It will be a little longer until I finish it, but it WILL be worth the wait. This is turning into my longest chapter yet, which I know will make a LOT of you happy. I have had a lot of fun writing this chapter, and big thanks goes to all of you people who have left comments telling me what you liked, what you did not like, and suggestions on how to improve my writing.

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Okay everypony! Chapter 4 will be up soon! Depending on how everything goes, I hope to have it by tommorow or Friday!

So, I was going over my older chapters, and I was cleaning them up, making them sound a little better, etc etc, when I accidently clicked on the unpublish icon.... Sorry that you all got an update message when there is no update.

I have decided to change the title. It is now Reflections of the Heart. I feel that this title is a better representation of the story. Mind you, when I first came up with this idea, it was meant to be a one shot, but it has evolved into something much bigger than my original idea. Also I found a good image for my story. Finally!