So, is the description of FPV alluring or not? Is it outright bad? Does it need a complete overhaul? · 7:47am Mar 20th, 2012
I've been thinking about thsoe questions for a few days now, and a few more related to FPV's description. Of course, it does pretty much what it's supposed to, but is it enough? Are people dismissing the story as a Human in Equestria story without a closer look because of the possibly unimaginative description? Now obviously I do not wish to directly spoil the twist presented in the first chapter, but I think the description should present a catch, a veritable something that intrigues