119862 Ok, I have sent the TXT. I hope your eyes would not pop out

119862 well, chapter 2 is in my andriod note pad and I have to time to take it out right now, but I can give you my chapter 1. Is that ok?

119848
Okay, go to my profile and I would suggest sending me chapter two before uploading it to fimfiction. (I've got my email on my page).
At 20:00 GMT today (7th september) I should have finished editing it, if you get it to me within two hours of posting.
Also note, I use Greenwich Mean Time to standardize when I use times. It makes it simple for everyone involved to figure out what works for them.

119704 Well, anything! I am open to any critisim and you may just do whatever you want to my stories. I have chapter 2 now and it seems that I have to edit a lot of stuff.

Dear author of the story, May I ask this of you?
Your first chapter was... to be frank, unbearable to read. Grammar and redundancy wise.
I'd like -and this is a one time chance for your first chapter- to edit this first chapter. This is because you are new, and I'd like to give you a chance to not get put down from everyone down voting your story. As of me doing this comment, you are 5/21 up to down.
That would discourage many an author from continuing the story.
I'll do my best to keep content the same
Will you allow me this?