Alt title: How to write Equestria on Earth

Note: this is a response to another poster in a thread.
Chat, it appears you are utterly missing the point of my post, so allow me to elucidate.

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1) The new chapter of OPT has the outline written for it. Sort of. Expect Side Stories to update before this.

2) Side Stories has a chapter about 1/2-3/4ths written. The earlier teaser is related. Also, if you favorited OPT then favorite this. Some stuff from the OPT plotline or background will be in this and not in the main story.

3) WP3k is not currently being worked on in favor of the above 2 stories. Since, you know, I don't get any feedback on it so I assume it's not very popular.

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Priority Alarm
Anomalous Vessel Detected
Location: South Atlantic Ocean \ Scotia Sea
~12.484 Nautical Miles Off Equestrian Barrier
USS Enterprise
Gerald R. Ford Class Aircraft Carrier
Strategic Value: Absolute

>new OPT chapter
>massive feels
>been about two days
>only 3 people commented on it

Guys the plot's actually moving along now instead of just rewrites. You guys have commented more on the rewrites than actual story progression.

srsly

Anyway, I'm probably going to get headway on WP3k now and give OPT a break. Gotta get Feros and some delicious sideplots...

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1. Capitalism Causes Inequality. Capitalism is the idea that the pothead who dropped out of college for extra gaming time should make less money than the engineering student who worked two jobs to pay his way through school.

This is wrong. Those two people should get the same income. I am outraged. Equality is inherently good, regardless of why equality exists.

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GUISE
FAVORITE IT
GUISE
SRSLY

I published the TCB event in a compilation thing. Any other events and plot bunnies in the OPTverse will be in this story.

Submitted my entry to the 12th TCB event. Nice experience, and I actually got something done in a short amount of time. Here it is, erryone. Also, it is part of the OPT storyline. I may publish it here as "OPT side stories" or something with other oneshots in the OPT sub-universe. I might also do side story oneshots with WP3k if anyone would read them.

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Well, just wrote an alternate ending to OPT. Now I feel bad. No new chapter right now, but here's some progress because I'm bored:
OPT
Chapter 6: Rough draft around 1/4th-1/3rd completed
Chapter 7: Outline around 1/5th completed
Overall: Around 1/3rd-1/2 of current story line completed

WP3k
Chapter 6 "Feros": First sentence of rough draft completed

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Rough draft done. Excited to finally get back to moving the story along. What I need is a prereader. I don't mean one look and "Looks good", I mean going through it and commenting on the problems. If anyone volunteers I will PM you the link.

Thanks.

Changelog:

General grammar/dialogue
Moved scenes around
Added scene with Gene Seed (As of right now. If you have already read it before this blog, it's between Ryan and Jack's scenes)