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No worries. I’ve checked out the first chapter of your story and so far it seems decent. Granted it’s only the first chapter and I’ve yet to see how you handle writing duels. So that part of judgement, I’ll put on hold for now.

Not to mention how the girls will play a role into this story. You already know how I handled them in my stories.

All in all, right now, I’m just waiting to see what direction you choose to take this story in.

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Hey, sorry for the late response. But, I did like both of the sequel stories. If you have time, you can check out my first story here. It maybe not as good as yours, but I think I did good. You don't have too if you want too.

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If you enjoy it, then be sure to check out the small sequels that I also wrote.

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Hey, no problem It's a good read. I'm currently making my first story here.

Thanks for adding my Yugioh story to your favorites.